I like where this is headed, Well done Misha. Waiting for the next chapter. To all out there support your favorite authors.
TBC
christinaklements@yahoo.com
My initial reaction was to give this a star. However, I reconsidered before I did that. I think this was fairly well written, very few mistakes in grammar/spelling/vocab. There were a few places where the dialog was forced and stuff...not like real people would converse.
I'm choosing to see this as a wonderful base...a crust...that you are about to use to give us a great piece of work.
English
Very well done.
Well written and an easy read.
Beautiful story
Love uninhibitedness of the family. Great sexual words used.
Ohh
can't wait for the next bit of this
Thanks
Turtle, Always and Anonymous, and especially 41Skipper, for your kind words and encouragement. More to cum *wink* MP2
Yes
I like where this is headed, Well done Misha. Waiting for the next chapter. To all out there support your favorite authors.
TBC
christinaklements@yahoo.com
Hmmm
My initial reaction was to give this a star. However, I reconsidered before I did that. I think this was fairly well written, very few mistakes in grammar/spelling/vocab. There were a few places where the dialog was forced and stuff...not like real people would converse.
I'm choosing to see this as a wonderful base...a crust...that you are about to use to give us a great piece of work.
Bring it!
Thank You Teddy Bear and Baw
The next 5 chapters are in the queue for approval. Hope they arrive in your library soon! MP2
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