The story continues to inch forward, on both fronts (Cricket/Tim and the photo shoot). I am more anxious to get to the photo shoot, but I am very curious how the Cricket relationship will develop. You keep us in suspense!
I love this whole story. I eagerly await every episode.The story is always good and leaves one frustrated awaiting the next episode. Gwen is such a full character and is so slowly developed in the writers saga.
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Anonymous01/27/17
Well done...
Thank you for the next chapter. I agree with your other comments that this was another terrific step down the road for Gwen. You added a tremendous advance to the Gwen/Cricket relationship (including the massive hint that a threesome with Tim is becoming far more likely), pushed the nude equestrienne model story line into action, and kept the Bob and Yvette side story alive. Not to mention Gwen becoming more casual about her sexual growth in front of Alison.
And all that in just two pages!
I just hope we don't have to wait as long for the next installment. You've become my favorite Literotica author, and every day that I come in, I look for your story first.
Thanks so much, again.
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Anonymous01/28/17
Thank You
The story goes on and it is a very enjoyable tale. I could see where you could actually publish this as a book and be quite successful.
by
Anonymous01/29/17
Huh?
It seems like in each chapter there is less and less progress to the point where almost nothing is happening.
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Anonymous01/30/17
Nice update
Love the way the story is progressing. My only request is early updates which I know you are trying inspite of your commitments.
Hats off, please continue.
by
Anonymous01/30/17
Thank you!
Like waiting for Christmas. I check for your posts first and often! The story is progressing nicely, and leaves the reader anticipating what progress is to be made in each facet of Gwens new life...
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Anonymous02/08/17
awesome
Your update is awesome. You are constantly on the top authors list in the category, and you deserve it. Please give timely updates to help us shagg and stay horny.
I also look for yours first and often. You craft your story so well. I will have to try myself soon. I get really excited about the growth of Gwen. Makes me do wet. I feel as if I know her.
English
Anticipation
Glad to see you're back with another chapter!
The story continues to inch forward, on both fronts (Cricket/Tim and the photo shoot). I am more anxious to get to the photo shoot, but I am very curious how the Cricket relationship will develop. You keep us in suspense!
Please keep it going.
seeing things
I love this whole story. I eagerly await every episode.The story is always good and leaves one frustrated awaiting the next episode. Gwen is such a full character and is so slowly developed in the writers saga.
Well done...
Thank you for the next chapter. I agree with your other comments that this was another terrific step down the road for Gwen. You added a tremendous advance to the Gwen/Cricket relationship (including the massive hint that a threesome with Tim is becoming far more likely), pushed the nude equestrienne model story line into action, and kept the Bob and Yvette side story alive. Not to mention Gwen becoming more casual about her sexual growth in front of Alison.
And all that in just two pages!
I just hope we don't have to wait as long for the next installment. You've become my favorite Literotica author, and every day that I come in, I look for your story first.
Thanks so much, again.
Thank You
The story goes on and it is a very enjoyable tale. I could see where you could actually publish this as a book and be quite successful.
Huh?
It seems like in each chapter there is less and less progress to the point where almost nothing is happening.
Nice update
Love the way the story is progressing. My only request is early updates which I know you are trying inspite of your commitments.
Hats off, please continue.
Thank you!
Like waiting for Christmas. I check for your posts first and often! The story is progressing nicely, and leaves the reader anticipating what progress is to be made in each facet of Gwens new life...
awesome
Your update is awesome. You are constantly on the top authors list in the category, and you deserve it. Please give timely updates to help us shagg and stay horny.
Big thank you.
I also look for yours first and often. You craft your story so well. I will have to try myself soon. I get really excited about the growth of Gwen. Makes me do wet. I feel as if I know her.
Excellent
Love the directions you're taking this. The quality of writing is outstanding as usual.
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