Don't know know where you are from, but here in cattle country size 12 and 14 are heifers.
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Anonymous02/07/17
pstn
OK, this is pure krap. You say chubby, but not noticeable?
Her tits lay "graciously" on her chest? we're talking chubbies, correct? Gloriously, perhaps.
The milk thing is...possible but improbable. Check out galactorrhea for a better understanding of the subject.
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Anonymous02/07/17
Absolute shit
Learn English before you post another story. Even the title contains an error. Do you know the difference between a pleural and a possessive?
Best of all get an editor who can at least try and sort out this drivel.
Garbage.
1 star
It was akay at best as both the sex and the build up (if there was any) was rushed. I don't have a problem with simple stories but there was no character that i can like. It was like slot A goes into slot B and by the way did I told you that both slot A and B are related.
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Anonymous02/09/17
Fun short story
Often when sisters catch brother panty sniffing hey use it to control brother. Many make him eat pussy and jerk off in front of them.
English
Start
Oo start, hope to see more
Strange…
… a virgin with breasts "plump with milk" !
Please learn how to write dialogue
Chubby chaser?
Don't know know where you are from, but here in cattle country size 12 and 14 are heifers.
pstn
OK, this is pure krap. You say chubby, but not noticeable?
Her tits lay "graciously" on her chest? we're talking chubbies, correct? Gloriously, perhaps.
The milk thing is...possible but improbable. Check out galactorrhea for a better understanding of the subject.
Absolute shit
Learn English before you post another story. Even the title contains an error. Do you know the difference between a pleural and a possessive?
Best of all get an editor who can at least try and sort out this drivel.
Garbage.
1 star
horrible
study harder in school.
Wish I could be positive
I have to agree with the others. This wasn't even a good rough draft.
Good story
Sexy, erotic
Criticism is necessary
It was akay at best as both the sex and the build up (if there was any) was rushed. I don't have a problem with simple stories but there was no character that i can like. It was like slot A goes into slot B and by the way did I told you that both slot A and B are related.
Fun short story
Often when sisters catch brother panty sniffing hey use it to control brother. Many make him eat pussy and jerk off in front of them.
awesome
2 virgin sister cunts ine one night.
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