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This was pure awesome!!!
From the start to the end, including all the POVs and different thoughts about the same occurrences, it was a blast to read! I laughed at her parents and their "secret" sex routine going in flames thanks to some serious talk and a special neglige, gotten great insight into Bryan and how he perceived Carla and their join/separate past, and finally Carla and her take on a busy night with high hopes for a BBQ that now lays forgotten (along with the bucket).
The dialogues were superbly made tis time, nothing to add or bicker here. The monologues and though processes were equally superb, filling just what we missed last two times and gave a great promise for the next one.
5* doesn't cover the work that went into this and I can only hope the next one either keeps the quality or even tops it. Great work!
to much filler
I like the story and characters but each chapter seems to get more and more pointless filler. Makes it harder going than it has to be. Still enjoying it though.
Fun and enlightening chapter
This chapter has seemed fun to me and has helped me to understand the story better.
I hope that finally Carla and Bryan will end up together and with Brie.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
Much better
Much much better than the first two. Keep going!
Nice story and a tad longer.
I hope you finish this story without rushing it. Nice read.
FAN BLOODY TASTIC STORY!
She-it man! This is a very good story! I definitely am waiting for the next chapter! Two things I look for in a story, Romance and a humorous one liners! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
Hoping for a simple resolve
in Ch. 03
This one wandered around without focus. I don't understand the purpose of the text message. Was it to tell mom she wasn't coming home tonight because she was staying with Bryan? Because if that's the case we might as well have gone straight into the next morning without a break for a new submission.
Excellent!
I feel as if I know each of the characters now. I read all three "supermarkets" at one sitting. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter!
WAITING!
I loved it so far. I was so happy to see chapter 2 and the 3 right after. Now PLEASE do not make us wait too long.
Great work overall, all of your stuff. I know I am always in for a good read when I see your name.
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