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Trials of Atlas Bk. 01: Prologue

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by gregsjln01/31/17

Ughhhh come on....

Hey seriously great story, as in intro it would have done a lot better with more than one page

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by Anonymous02/01/17

Pretty Cool

I really loved what you did here, but a page or two more would have been nice. Can't wait to read what's next!

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