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Is Love All or Nothing? Ch. 08

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/30/17

Next one

Wen are u going going to post de next one?

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by DestinyReader01/30/17

next chapter

My next chapter has been submitted to my editor. After that I will post if I feel nothing else needs to be changed.

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by bruce2202/03/17

The Romance goes Erotic

That was a nice stroker, it really convinced me that they make a great couple.

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by UltimateHomeBody02/06/17

nice

I am enjoying the story, but have a couple of questions.
What is the octagon?
Why doesn't she have sheets etc on her bed?

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by DestinyReader02/06/17

answers

The octagon is in reference to the eight sided cage that MMA fighters fight in.

She didn't have sheets on her bed because they were just done in the laundry. That is a detail I did overlook.

I do always welcome criticism and questions on comments or in feedback. For those wondering chapter 9 is waiting to be edited. I put no rush on my editor and let him edit my story in turn with all the other stories he edits from other writers. I will say I am writing on chapter 10.

Thank you everyone for all the encouraging words and openness to this story. I love hearing how you, the reader, are starting to understand people you know with Asperger's better and more understanding.

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by TheOldRomantic02/24/17

At last they are a couple!

Well, at last they are already a consummate couple!
They just had their first full sexual relationship and it seems to have been more than fully satisfying to both.
Someone may think that this is not important, but I can assure my experience that this is very, very important. My first time with my wife was somewhat magical, and sleeping with her then was perfect.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

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