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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/31/17

punished for peeping

kind of crap.
You use THERE in the introduction too manytime
"There was one women in particular who I was instantly attracted to." Hardly, and you don't end a sentence with a preposition.
"But I convinced Ashley that wed handle it ourselves. " High school sophomores write better.

No stars tonight.

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by Anonymous02/01/17

poor bastard

never got to fuck. not a very erotic story...

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by prop6902/01/17

what a dream

great

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