All Comments on 'Sex Slave Mother'

Take your time.........you move too fast! There is no build up and thus, your story lacks any passion. There also seems to be a lot of mysoginistic hatred imbued within the story. Check your grammer as well. Poor grammer makes for a poor read!

spelling errors, grammar problems and no buildup to the sex and romance.

ch1 isnt good, just boring. but ch4 is exlnt and exciting. specially when the boy caned his mother to bleed and mom get passed out with exhaustion. this is a new and great kind of mom/son incest idea as i think. every moment in ch4 are excitable. but what about ch5? you say its going to continue but you are not come back from many years. where r u? we need it so badly. made ch5 more brutally where son caned his mothers ass more badly and mother get ill, her ass get injured.

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nobody has a 14 inch cock 4inches wide - and why do you insist on not using the article "the" in your sentences? this is hard to read.

And that was it. I will read no more.

I don't know about letting somthing that bib into my boy cunnie but I would sure love sucking it and being drowned by a huge load of cum.

it was a good story bu a 14 year old with a 14 inch cock and 4 inch wide what a load of bull. ruined the story for me

I and my son have sex everynight. I m his sex slave. He gves me orders and i obey.

CONTRIVED, FORCED REPETITIVE DIALOG THIS WOULD BE A SECOND RATE FIRST DRAFT!!! DO THE READING PUBLIC A FAVOR AND ENLIST THE ASSISTANCE OF A LITERATE EDITOR OR SIMPLY QUIT WRITING ALTOGETHER!!! AN UNWORTHY "EFFORT"

too many semi-colons

too few commas

bad spelling

poor word choice

Tina took promise from me that I wouldn't to talk to him but only see him from distance. (awkwardly worded)

I called him at my brother's place to console him for the tragic death of his stepmother. (stepfather)

I explained to him that I was his father's long distance sister and that his stepmother's (stepfather’s) last wish

My brother left enough money for him so that he could live a comfortable life. After much persuasion, he agreed to come to California to stay with me and fulfill his stepmother (stepfather’s) last wish.

On (the) phone I told him that I will be carrying (a) placard at (the) airport

Since I was 16 year old, I've had (an) obsession with aged women. (years) (awkwardly worded)

After (the) funeral, we returned home

I slept bear without bedclothes. (awkwardly worded) (bare)

I took Tina in my arm (arms)

"Aaaaaah, ooooh God.... I am almost COMIIIIIIIIIIIIIG. Mom, I am very close..." I started grunting. "Mom, I'm COMING IN YOUR MOUTH!" I could not hold back, I started COMING IN HER MOUTH like a jet. I CAME like I never CAME before. 43 words 3 COMING 2 CAME 11%

her hand was once again strocking my cock. (stroking)

My fingers sought out her hard nipple (nipples) and I felt her moan into our passionate kiss as I gently pinched her nipples.

her other hand was holding my sacs. (sac)

"Mom, I am going to make a passionate love to you. (awkwardly worded)

placed my finger at the side of (the) elastic, and started pulling her panties down.

Now she was totally nude. I could see her hairless pussy. It was my first time seeing hairless pussy, 14 words > 28% (hairless pussy)

At the same time my cock leap in action (leapt into)

I pulled her at (to) the edge of the bed, and lift (lifted) her one leg up to my shoulder and (left the) other -(left it) hanging to the ground.

rubbed my COCK gently (-to) (at) the entrance of her mound

I never knew that I (-will) (would) be loosing (losing) my virginity like this and (-that also from) (with) my mom.

I worked my shaft slowly in side (inside) her pussy, my cock was moving slowly inside her wetness, her tight hole stretch (stretched) with my penetration, she moan (moaned) under me,

don; t (don’t) care what happen (happens)

I increase (increased)my speed, I grasped;

"Oh, my God It (it) feel (feels) so good

I lost my virginity, and now I have become (a) man, (-man of) my adopted mother(‘s man).

She screamed and her screamed (scream) was pierceless (piercing??), (I was thankful) (-thanks) that we were staying near the seaside and far from neighbours. I also grunted,

"Oh! Mom, I cannot hold myself I want to COME"

" COME son, COME in my pussy, aaaaaaah, I'm also comiiiiiiiiig (COMIIIIIIIIInG, I'm COMING, COME with me, please, COME with me,"

you can have me any time (anytime)

I am (-the) game, do what you feel (like) doing. I won't say no to you. You can fuck any time, even when I am sleeping. You have given all the pleasure I want, so now you are free to do what you wish to do and I will fulfill all your fantasy (fantasies). "

"Oh, mom, you are great. I have lot s (lots) of fantasy (fantasies) and I hope; You (you) will fulfilled (fulfill) all my fantasy (fantasies),"

" this Tina will obey your order" (awkwardly worded)

"Well, my first order is that you are not going to wear any thing (anything )

" OK, my master, your wish is (-your) (my) command (-for me)

I will be thankful (-of) if you sleep with me in my bed and let serve you with my tight pussy. I will be thankful (-of) to you"

I oblige (obliged) her

(-And act) (She acted) like (a) slave

she died in (a) car accident

Continue... (To be continued)

I will tell (you) how we met (by?) accident

This was dreadful to read. I felt my brain cells committing suicide.

your brain is a void like your personality and skills at making a woman happy. But with men!! Oh you're the king of cock suckers !

She was shocked, but even more so when I dropped my shorts revealing my hard cock. She just stood there, not knowing what to do as I grabbed her arm leading her to the couch. I pulled her sweater and bra up revealing the tits I'd dreamt of for years. I began fondling them, as suckling on her nipples making them hard. She resisted me, but when I pulled up her skirt, I could see a wet spot on her panties from her arousal. Noticing that, I tore her panties off, pushed up her skirt, and pushed my hard cock between her pussy's lips. My mom gasped as I did, but within a few strokes, she began to moan as I fucked her. I pulled off her sweater, and tossed it, and her bra to the floor then began to increase the force of my assault on her pussy. I grabbled hold of my mom's nice C-cup tits as I fucked her hard, and deep. I decided I wanted to take her doggy position and moved her onto her knees, putting her hands on the back of the couch. I moved my cockhead down her ass until I felt her warm pussy juices, then I thrust up inside her. I reached around cupping, and fondling, my mom's tits as I pounded her from behind. When I heard my mother's orgasm begin, I started hammering against her ass, the head of my cock hitting the bottom of her pussy. Within seconds I was shooting my cum deep inside her, knowing I'd be doing it again as soon as we recovered.

"Unrealistic

This was dreadful to read. I felt my brain cells committing suicide."

Why spoil a perfect analysis?

What an absolute crock of shit, not even worth the space on Literotica’s server.

I have my mom sister very old granny at command they my fuck toys i taught them now they good girls obey me at all time

I love spanking them i make them stand and wait there turn i make them wear shirt bra panties skirts

It's apparent English is not the authors first language. This is obviously some really bad writing but the only thing more ridiculous than the story itself are more than a dozen people leaving feedback for a story from 2004! Even the 1st comment was 9 yrs too late in 2013. The guy hasn't been active for 15 yrs. Hilarious!

14" cock? 4" around? You have to be really anatomically challenged to not realize the absurdity of your dimensions..lol Why do writers have to be so detached from reality?..lol

Well that was fucking stupid...