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from Anonymous-E
Love it x 100. Well, at least I know now that the two characters Rafe meets are friendly and become quests in the House of Rafe and his family. The lizard character, K'Kess sure sounds nice. But he is trust worthy? And what about Iloma and her relationship with the lizard people? I still have my doubts.
Great story
Thanks sooo much for attempting to make it longer , also like how the tech is slowly coming inti things. I think it would be a cool idea to bring in"primitive methods" for creativing fire, traps and things and such while continuing with the gradual imersion of tech. Nice writing i enjoyed the story so far , please we need more.
Primitive means
I think you should continue keeping things low tech and start introducing gunpowder. Maybe some explosions would scare them off lol
@ Anonymous-E
Thank you! *puts it under a copier and sets the amount to 101* :-)
Yes, Iloma and K'Kess are friendly, and all I can say for now is that they have a role to play later in the larger sequel, apart from what they'll do here.
As for Iloma and her relationship with the lizard people, there just might be something there. *grin*
@ anonymous
Thank you, but honestly, it wasn't a real attempt but more of a natural break again. I expect the following chapters to be longer because of what's going to happen.
As for the tech, since the main characters come from a modern world there are some advancements that I have planned (although it will need a little bit of fantasy too).
Apart from that, there will be a find to help them later on and in the future.
I agree with needing more, it seems there's only a little available in this genre, which is why I enjoy writing it.
For more like this look at (unfortunately unfinished) Kita'thalla by Bowoodstock and the stories of RipperFish
@ Allinthehead
It will mostly stay low tech, yes. But with a few surprises.
I wonder if this level of technology could have a cool name like steampunk has. Woodpunk? Stonepunk? Primipunk?
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