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sweet
looking forward to ch.2.. btw, hope your character invested in duracell stock!
okay
Thought this was well written, Lisa. Nothing was overdone or unrealistic. Has to be one of the best I've read on here.
Congrats,
Candida.
Great!
Enjoyed the story...looking forward to CH.2!
Wow!
I liked this story a lot. It actually made me think that my gf and I aren't doing nearly enough with her toys for her. Your story is well written and put lots of ideas in my head. I would say it was a success! Keep them coming.
I Like This Story!
Very hot!
Also, so realistic.
What better place for a story like this but a busy hotel in the Big Apple?
Tantalyzing, with yummy suspense building!
I can't wait for part 2.
Sizzling!!!
Love the multiple sexual theme in your story. Everyone of them sizzling hot! Can't wait for the next chapter to see how you're going to top this story.
Sensual and Hot
This is great. i want more. Erotica from women is usually not hot enough for this woman.The woman's point of view was sensual, but the sex was explosively hot. i want chapter 2.
Congratulations
Very nice writing style here, yes we all want sex and you give it with flair. Alacrity.
Nice story
Excellent story. I'm looking forward to part two.
very hot
Loved it, it's very hot and keeps building. The only thing I would ask, is that I'd like to know a little more about who Jen is?
Very good
I liked the buildup, sexy.
Wow!
Very well written and incredibly hot!
eric shawn listo
Very good work Lisa:D
Damn girl. I'd love to see more of your work:D He he he he Maybe one day the two of us can colaberate on a story;) I know we could do good work t'gether, jus as long as you do th writin:D
HOTT!
Very well done Lisa....I could almost imagine myself there in the hotel room with Jen!
I can see you're not afraid to test the boundaries of creative ideas for your stories!
Out.
Shameless Plug
You /are/ a really good writer.
Dont let this one pass you by!!!
Wow!... I just cant wait for chapter 2! (or for "Room Service")
Excellent lead in and content, Extremely arrousing. I give it a 2! (Thats 2 orgasms while reading)
I only wish it was longer (the story)
Cant wait for chapters 2-10!
SMILE!
Drew
Good one Lisa
Obviously, that thread got you 'thinking'.
So thanks for putting it down on paper.
So far so good!
Now get moving and get the next chapter posted, I'm dying to find out what happens next!
Grrrr~ Holy Cow Lisa
Iam only Bi and this really got me Horny
Waiting for Chapter 2
Lisa, great story, cant wait till you get the next chapter up! :)
Very well written
You do an excellent job of painting a picture in the reader's mind. I throughly enjoyed it.
-Colly
Wow, very hot lisa!
Can't wait for the second chapter...you're such a naughty girl!
hot hotel
what a great story of a great time a women can have. she has her toys, her tease and her outfits. All three were described soooo hot. fun and hot reading...didn't know what was going to happen next.
Lisa!
I SO loved it! Can't wait for chapter two!
I fell in love with Jen as soon as I'd read about two paragraphs. I know it may be fictional but the ideas that she had make me want to try them myself!
Don't stop now girl! Stacie
Hello Ms. Denton!
Good morning. I stumbled across your story and just wanted to say hello. You are VERY attractive and a very good storyteller as well!
Thanks!
Very nice
I liked this mucho
Uh Wow
That was great, hurry with ch. 2
hot hot hot!
i just had to come see who you were..check out ur stories.
this sizzled!
chapter 2 tomorrow doll, thanks for the visit, and note on my story.
cheers! xx fawnie
good
saw you on the posts, good story
Wonderfully Naughty!
I liked the isolated sense this story had, the escape Jen achieved from the real world. It added to the intensity of her feelings and arousal, with the poor room-service girl providing a touch of hot humor. Very nicely done!
Excellent
excellent; hot and sexy as hell
very hot
loved this story read it 2-3 times,each times invokeing incredible orgasims
sweet
very nice, very sexy
Great story
Loved both parts, read them over again. *S* Very hot.
Oh My
Lisa I found it, I actuall came reading it you naughty girl. I could not figure out the sign up thing so I am anonymous- does it help if I say montreal. I am going to look for the other one but these addresses are funny.
ASStounding
It was better than your beaver joke. Sonya
OMFG!!!!!
I love your naughty, wicked mind!!!!
Love it!! ;-)
wow
great story...
very imaginative and oh so naughty!
Highly erotic, intelligent, witty...
One would look far and wide to find a better story in this genre.
Bookmarked and added to favourites. One can read it again and again.
SN
Great Story
I loved the illegality of the products. Made it even more daring an illicit.
wow
this story is so freaking hot!!!!!!!!!
i want to bring room service!!!!!!
you go girl......
can I watch?
Great! Can I check into your hotel and come up to your room and watch while you pleasure yourself? I'd love to wank all over you...
Oh my Gawd!
This got me wet!
But Jen should have left the curtains open!
excellent
a friend said to read this one, i am so glad, good.
It's a Five!
Good stuff Lady! I read both parts,
hoping there's more to come.
Good toy story!
Ohh... I liked this! There's nothing like really devoted masturbation session :)
My, oh, my!
I'm pretty sure that I could not drop off to sleep until those batteries ran out of juice. Hot stuff! ~Imp
Naughty
Juicy & naughty! Great combo!
Horny little Jen
I wonder if she knows my Jen? :-)
Hot story and sexy woman.
I think she should wear a butterfly to dinner at the hotel's resturant, or in the cab to show the cabbie!
Nice story. Part III???
hot, hot ,hot!!
nothing beats a good toy story!! I loved it!
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