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An Elegant Seduction Pt. 06

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by TheOldRomantic01/31/17

Great & Romantic story between two girls

Who said that there can not be romanticism in a lesbian relationship? I was not sure (although I had seen some signs in real life), but this story has shown that romanticism can exist in a relationship, regardless of the sex of the protagonists.
In the same way, I have also liked the delicacy with which the subject of explicit sex has been treated, it has been elegant, it has been sensual and slightly erotic, not pornographic. It seems to me that we men should learn enough things from women, especially tenderness and delicacy, we should start thinking with the brain, and not with other parts of our body, even if it also has a head :).
On the other hand, my thanks to Shaima32 for his dedication in the prologue, I felt very flattered, in fact, it is the first time in my life that someone has done something like that.
Thank you.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), is not my native language.

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by wistful_of_oz01/31/17

Beautifully told

I hope many other old romantics find this story.

I love to read lesbian romances and it's taken me a long time to work out why.
As soon as a dick is introduced, 90% of the possibilities disappear.
So much is assumed/presumed/subsumed, sadly.
Without a dick, it's all lovemaking; with a dick it's mostly foreplay, merely tolerated.

Not all of blokes like me who read stories like this are perverts.
The art of romance thrives on possibility, internal suspense.
Thank you - I look forward to future submissions.

Always Wistful

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by jayrs01/31/17

Love all your stories. Cannot wait to read more :)

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by CorinnePapillon01/31/17

Thank you....

A wonderful story, delightfully told!

As I read it, I was there on Lewis with them....

So beautiful with such atmosphere!

Thank you - with affection

Corinne x

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by Anonymous02/07/17

Well done.

My favourite of all your stories. You allowed time for the characters to develop. Thank you.

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by Maonaigh02/14/17

Loved it

A lovely story, Shaima, well worth the five stars I've given every chapter. I'm a great enthusiast of long, well-plotted stories and this filled the bill to perfection (I'm also an old sucker for happy endings and got that too). I particularly liked the slow burn, so much more satisfying than one-page stories where you barely have time to learn the characters' names before they're down and dirty. And being Irish descent, I had no trouble pronouncing "cead mile failte".

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by nsfwaa02/20/17

Love it

Really enjoined the story hope to read more of their lives.

keep up the good work

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