All Comments on 'A Daughter and Her Daddy'

There were a few typos. A good proofreader would have caught.

Please continue the seduction of Daddy. He does want you!

Waiting for more!

I appreciate short stories but regardless at least complete it to the point of

Incest then leave us hanging. Appetizers like these do nothing for me.

Kinda short for a first installment.

For your first story, you did quite well. Ignore the people who critique you, you've got a good fantasy going, and writing it should be enjoyable to you as much as to anyone else...and if they don't like it, they can read something else.

Keep them cumming though ;)

Its NO WAY a rich women would let her looks or body go. They'd get plastic surgery or trainers & have private chefs. So besides that dumb part about mom & that it's way too short. I can't complain. Though its barely long enough to even start to get you hooked

Don't listen to the haters. This was a good opening and I can't wait to see where it goes

i love this topic i jack off to it all the time and your story was no exception it had me stroking my cock and needing more plese keep them cumming

Many young women have same desire. It does not take much effort to seduce dad. A few "accidental" flashes, leaving strong scented panties is usually enough to achieve objective.

Giving a critique does not make one a hater. If you believe it does then you are far too young, mentally, to be reading such stories.Telling a writer to ignore critiques is absolutely the worst advice to give. Without critiques or understanding there is an issue will cause a writer to stagnate.

It is a decent beginning and premise. Attempting to justify her future affair with dad is pointless, because cheating is not the fault of the one being cheated on. There is no need to bother delving into that beyond stating mom and dad don't have any physical relationship. Suggestion mom let herself go is weak considering the daughter is judging her based on her teenaged body. It is a fact that gravity works no matter how toned one is at mom's age. Since the story is too short to actually include the incest it would be best served to not include information not pertinent to the central relationship.

It would be better to have a longer story or chapter which doesn't seem to stop short of its purpose. Most people do read for masturbation material, so providing a bit more of the actual incest is always a good idea. I hope to read more of your stories soon.

To those griping about critiques:

There is a difference between telling a writer their story sucks without any reason for the opinion and telling a writer the story is good with a few critiques intended to be helpful.

very nice start....please continue.....

keep it up ;)

I'm really looking forward to the next part.

So far so good... Thank you!

Please continue...

I can't wait for more

He seriously has to fuck her senseless and get her pregnant. Kick the wife to the curb and just keep on fucking daughter over and over. Every day, multiple times a day.

he just has to fill her teenage cunt full of his daddy cock

Can't wait to read how she seduces her dad and gets him to fuck her like she deserves!

Your prose is solid and dripping with eroticism. What you've got here is a very short, but very arousing lead-in to a promising story. Please post the rest!

Please write more. Oh I need to know how this daughter gets to fuck her own father. I am just like her. I've been masturbating to daddy daughter incest since I was barely 18 wondering what's wrong with me. I need to hear more, I love her cumming in her father's chair.

For my daughter Laura.

Where’s part two?! I want the rest of the story. I need it

Very good story!

The number of positive comments you have must surely give encouragement to continue this story. I find it an interesting start that could develope into a stimulating tale.

Not much, there's not much to the story.

Wating for the 'seduction',then the train stopped! Oh you tease ,you!

Good story,good set up,and despite what another critique pointed out,not EVERY 'rich woman' will take care of herself.And if the mother character was 'rich', she would have her own damn money.Take the advice you can use,forget the bad opinions , and continue to write.

AND FINISH THIS STORY DAMMIT!!...My acorns is turning blue!

Like many of the other comments please, please , continue the story. You are a great writer.

Very exciting erratically special

Excellent start can’t wait to read more

Please finish this quite soon! I can only imagine several scenarios!

Keep going princess