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i really enjoyed this. this theme is always fun to work with. i only have one suggestion. take it or leave it. but in this line:

"that yes I did I wrote I tried"

possibly commas after yes, did, wrote, tried,

or in the manner you have some of your lines set up

that yes (space) i did (space) i wrote (space) i tried.

that is all i saw. nice job.

...should be required reading.

saw myself, first thing I stopped doing is:

"brown nosing every dead end rhyme"

great line, almost, just almost, if I had the time

Oh crap!

sucky poem! None of my sucky poems are nearly as good as this. None of my good poems are as good as this. Can I have your trash?

And then again perhaps it weren't the words

But the medium used to write on ~ register tape

Bit of a limiting factor to begin with.

A talented poet ~ while she metaphorically beats herself about the head for lack of creative ability ~ she writes something so enjoyable. We should all be so lucky!