Misha, great story, but you confuse the reader. Is Claude Nel's uncle or grandfather?
When referring from Claude's point, you refer to Nel as his "granddaughter", but when from Nel's point, he's her Uncle.
Claude except as her mother's brother... her uncle. Claude is grandpa, too because Sally (Nel's mom) is Claude's sister AND daughter as a result of the affair with Carla... refer to Chapter One Portland to Denver. MP2
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wow
loving this, please keep going. Is Nel going to milk him dry now she has had a taste of the real thing.
Misha, great story, but you confuse the reader. Is Claude Nel's uncle or grandfather?
When referring from Claude's point, you refer to Nel as his "granddaughter", but when from Nel's point, he's her Uncle.
Nel Doesn't Know
Claude except as her mother's brother... her uncle. Claude is grandpa, too because Sally (Nel's mom) is Claude's sister AND daughter as a result of the affair with Carla... refer to Chapter One Portland to Denver. MP2
Wtf
Niece? Or Granddaughter?
??? Anonymous ???
I thought this was clarified for Dickeydoo... see above comment. BOTH. MP2
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