All Comments on 'Family Comfort Ch. 05'

loving this, please keep going. Is Nel going to milk him dry now she has had a taste of the real thing.

Misha, great story, but you confuse the reader. Is Claude Nel's uncle or grandfather?

When referring from Claude's point, you refer to Nel as his "granddaughter", but when from Nel's point, he's her Uncle.

Claude except as her mother's brother... her uncle. Claude is grandpa, too because Sally (Nel's mom) is Claude's sister AND daughter as a result of the affair with Carla... refer to Chapter One Portland to Denver. MP2

Niece? Or Granddaughter?

I thought this was clarified for Dickeydoo... see above comment. BOTH. MP2

A couple of chapters ago, you had Nel with three fingers halfway inside her pussy. Considering the hymen is at the entrance to the vagina, and not wandering around somewhere inside (as too many people believe), Nel had already deflowered herself with her three fingers, if not during some earlier self-play.

You are absolutely correct about the wording. the description came from Nel's point of view. "Three fingers buried halfway in her virgin pussy" doesn't necessarily mean the fingers were buried half their own length and thus penetrating the shielded os. They were buried "halfway in her virgin pussy." I.E. not penetrating but only getting halfway there (before meeting the hymen.) Your point about the anatomy and the confusing sentence is well taken. I appreciate its niceness. :-) MP2

Her first time was described just raunchy enough.

a little short - and you knew what was coming - but very well done.