Mother Examining Son

OUTSTANDING!!!

GREAT START TO A NEW SERIES. KEEP IT GOING.

A Great Start

Looks like fun and games are yet to begin. Bring on more Chapter's....

Outstanding Story

Waiting for more chapters. Thanks

I like it.

Well done. I look forward to seeing future chapters.

great

keep them cumming

hmmmm

yummy

Reminds me

When my sister went to nursing school and did some examinations on me.

super hot

after the shower she might need to learn how to milk the prostate with a strapon

Very exciting

Very exciting story. After the shower, as the mom said she needs some more help if he didn't mind. Hope it will be that the mom have some itch deep inside her womb that need scratching. She asks the son to insert his finger inside her but the itch is way deep inside. So she ask him to insert his penis to rub it but said that there should be no malice on this and said that he don't make any ideas that what they are doing is intercourse, it is just for him to help her scratch that itch as she lovingly smiled at him.

Very nice. Looking forward to future chapters.

Gloves

Use gloves and stockings in ur story

Yep Keep Goin'

Great

Have a sister come home from college and have a threesome

"(Part 1. If liked, another part to follow.)"

If you have so little faith in your own story, don't bother.

keep goin

This is a good story. Keep going. Consider describing the hot Mom in more detail, her ass, legs, pussy and keep going with those nipples! Great job!

Interesting premise

Curious to see where you go with this.

Keep going with this man, oh man you could literally go anywhere with this. hoping for more

So, so hot.... Wowww

Your story is so incredibly HOT ... Wowwwwww Please go on with more chapters and coming....

Yes, so many possibilities! We sure do like this chapter and hope they're more than 1 new chapter. Mom got as hot as her son did and she sure gave him one heck of an exam. Hopefully, she'll want him to help her relieve any tension she has. This will have many possibilities and hopefully, they'll explore them all and her son will give her what she hasn't gotten for a very long time. I cannot wait for more! Thank you.

Please strapon or anal fisting.

More Please!

Perhaps mother and son can become lovers?

wow

bum job nice
my wife did this to me once, i shot my cum so much

Hot story

but you must continue...please!

More!

I think there should be a lot more chapter and maybe a sister and aunt come into it at different chapters? A bit of Public stuff.

Loved it!

Moving along nicely. Can't wait for more!

Use "and" not "&" wtf is this writing style

Seriously who does this lmao

Very Original****

What a funny story. I can not say personally that it was a hot story. Prostate exams are just not sexy to me. Thanks for sharing this fun read. I would read a part 2.

Feedback from readers

Thanks for the feedback from all. I wanted to a story a bit different from all of the other mother/son stories. Suggestions are duly noted & many are helpful. One or two must be reading my mind. LOL!

A lazy writer uses an ampersand (&).

An ampersand has its place, but it should never be used as a substitute for the word "and" when writing, unless it is part of a company's or corporation's title. If you are writing a follow-up chapter, please do not use the ampersand in place of the word "and."

Great

Could care less about the "&". If thats the only complaint then ignore them. Great story. Please go to chapter 2

An Anony Asshole

who reads and then criticizes an interesting and well written erotic (or porn) Mother/Son relationship story, which is very appropriate for this site, needs to have his imagined editorial "rights" restricted, rejected, thrown-out!!!1CAD

try to make your stories to at least 2-3 pages on here. Your scores will be higher and the readers will be able to get into the story much better before the story ends. This was a good start for a series.

great start....when can we expect chapter 2?

good job, looking for what follows a prostate exam......I love it write on......

Nadine

Wow!

I just shot a massive load of DISGUSTING cum from my dickie! Yeah! Fuck my ass with the spatula, mummy! DO IT, BITCH! I love her 3 ft. long tongue up my stanky shit coated hole. Yee, haa!

Suggest you employ an Editor!

Only read the first few paragraphs before being too irritated by the writing style to continue! Have you ever come across the word "and"?
Using "&" is acceptable in an email or text but not in "proper" writing.

At the risk of offending a biker...

...which I've made it a goal to avoid, successfully so far. I too believe that an editor or capable proof reader is an excellent idea to assist all writers in smoothing out any rough edges, spelling, and/or grammatical mistakes. However, as a FREE ONLINE EROTICA SITE the material is provided without any payment to the authors, they are amateurs with varying degrees of ability and readers must adjust their standards accordingly. This story was well written in plot and style, and while I am looking forward to reading the additional chapters, I seriously doubt anyone would classify or expect any of the stories here to meet the standards of "proper writing"!