All Comments on 'Just to Make it Last Longer'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
The last night between very pair of very close friends.

Going by the story description, I knew this was going to be bad. I mean really? 'Very pair of very close friends.'

For a start you need paragraphs that are no larger than 4-5 sentences.

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