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Wait a minute
Lemme see if I got this straight(no offense meant). The whole time the wife was the one tricking the husband instead of him playing her?
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Yes. The husband didn't know that after the hot talk the wife acted on it and became the boss's slave. The husband got played by the boss and his wife. Thanks for the comment.
Good story!
But difficult reading when the grammar is so bad.
Fair comment
Most (?) of the bad grammar was intentional so the characters didn't sound like they lept out of a Jane Austen novel, but it does demean the characters and interrupt the easy flow of the story. Thank you for the comment.
And you are?
I appreciate your comments regarding plausibility. But is anything written here truly plausible? That's the fun of it. If we wrote what actually happened in our lives it would be more boring than what I wrote. Have the courage to write your own story so I can read it the same critical eye as you and also don't do it anonymously.
Wow
Wow, great story! Fun twist at the end too!
Not great
poorly written and I started skimming.
Can't rate it.
A tough crowd!
I guess this is a love it or hate it story. Appreciate the feedback good or bad. Just remember you get what you pay for and it's always better to be nice if you want to be critical. Especially if you are not willing to put yourself out there with your own material.
Not non consent or reluctance
Loving wives would be better. and making the wife set it up in the end doesn't fit her her back story or marriage at all. Take out the twist and it a whole
Lot better story.
Good comment
It's always tough to pick the right category. Tried to fit backstory by showing her weakness when Mac made the suggestion the first time and her excitement watching Mac's favorite porn.
Chapter 2?
I loved the story! I'd love to see Mac become more of a sissy bitch and watch his wife get fucked
Glad you liked it!
I will put a sequel on my list. Am releasing a Tracy/Julie story next and then a long BDSM piece on the training of a slave.
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