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Brother Doctor

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/29/04

Love it!

You could have teased out the seduction even more...given the reader more of the brother's thoughts and feelings as he's seducing his sister.

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by sweetness_divine06/29/04

nice story... made me hot...

this was a great story. you chose your words carefully. i would have loved to hear more of what the brother was thinking while he seduced his sister. it would have been nice to explain the exact moment when her visit became an opportunity for him to make sweet love to her pussy. was it when she spread her legs for him? did her scent intoxicate him? was he turned on by her increasing wetness? stuff like that... but it was nice, really. thanks.

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by Anonymous06/29/04

Oooooooh God!

Oh my God! My favorite subject, handled in a perfect way. I hope this is part one and that the future parts deal with the fact that the pill came too late in this relationship (wink-wink!). I have to go clean off my chair now. Too slippery to sit in properly!

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by Anonymous06/30/04

GREAT FUCK STORY

Please include pregnant incest.

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by Anonymous06/30/04

wonderful!

it's great! excellent! fantastic! and definitely exciting! FABULOUS!!!

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by Anonymous07/08/04

Very sexy

Very sexy and luscious. You can describe the act so well! More please.

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by Anonymous07/15/04

Great Story

I thought this story was great. It got me so hot and I wanna hear more about what happens to the brother and sister.

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by Anonymous03/30/05

feel no pain

why not a quick injection that make dear si feel no pain

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by Anonymous06/22/05

Brother Doctor

What a terrible act of betrayal. Not only did he break all the medical ethics in the worst possible, but he took advantage of his own virginal sister and could have made her pregnant. I f**king loved it. You rule, girl.

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by Anonymous05/15/07

Fantastic !!!

The only thing that could have been better, is if this is what actually happened to you and your brother, and you got pregnant by him. Looking at your profile picture was an added turn on as well. Seeing your picture of you showing off your gorgeous body, only added to the excitement of the story. Please don`t stop, i would love to read more of your real life stories. Would be great to corresponde with you as well.

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by rm2h07/12/08

Sequel

I would love to know what happened with their relationship - Was she made pregnant? Did they commit to a long term relationship? I just enjoyed and read it all the time.

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by Anonymous10/30/08

HOT

I'm soaked. That's all I can say.

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by Cutie1812/06/08

Hot

It was great i hope a ch.2 is in order

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by RossDaniels12/29/08

Very well-written

And just perverted enough to be very hot.

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by TornWings05/14/10

MOEW PLEASE

So what happens next?? Keep going Please I loved it!

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by Anonymous07/24/10

More Please

Please write another chapter. This was really hot and I was wet in no time and had to finger myself wishing it wa me getting the examination and the fucking. Really nice picture but would like to see more.
Thanks,
Carole NZ

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by Anonymous08/01/10

KT

please write more....this made me soooo wet and had me wishing my brother was a doctor

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by Anonymous10/26/10

I love your writing

all the other posts...
but this one really should be in the non-consent section...

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by Anonymous07/22/11

please move to nonconsent

I'm not really into non-consent, and it really turned me off when it became obvious that it was. I really love your writing; I just don't like this kind of story. Please re-categorize it.

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Bro Doctor

I'm surprised that a girl can come right after losing her virginity
Is that common?
Greg

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by Anonymous03/04/12

Very Nice

Loved this story for sure. Would definately love to see another chapter or two on this, where they go from there! She says no he says yes :)

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by Anonymous03/15/13

Continue

Please continue!

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by blahblahblah6905/02/13

continue

please continue!!

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by rubyredroses06/11/13

shivering here

wow that was awesome, right on the edge of my seat, please write more soon!

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by sabra1602308/22/13

Must be continued

This story needs more chapters. Now that we are sucked up in the story you need to continue it with more chapters. Thanks

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by tygz09/16/13

After reading a couple of this author's stories - a job quickly done as there is little development or lead-up involved - I have to doubt the biography's statement of being female...

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by mike250110/15/13

I agree with TYGZ that the stories could use more length and DEFINITELY follow up chapters but I have LOVED the three I've read so far! I don't agree that he/she thinks the author is probably male. I've known a number of girls that get off/fantasize on being dominated and/or taken, even if in a lighter manner. Hell I even had a coworker that was younger than me that liked play rape (damn shame she wasn't interested in me (crying)) so the direction of the stories I've read here is of no surprise.

Good work on the stories and keep them coming! Thanks! :)

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by Anonymous11/14/13

holy shit that was hot!! whoa! :) I would LOVED a chapter two!!

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by sweet_sin17808/01/14

Oh snap!

Wow that was hot!! Straight to the point I like it!

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by Anonymous10/11/14

Awful

There is nothing redeeming or hot about rape!!

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by Anonymous12/15/14

RAPE

Yes, that was a rape! And nothing but a rape. Shame...

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by Anonymous06/04/15

LOVED IT!!!

hits all the right spots!

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by WORDSMITH201510/06/15

HATED IT !!!!!!

SHE NEVER HAD THE CHANCE TO REALIZE WHAT WAS HAPPENING TO HER UNTIL AFTER THE FACT AND NO CHANCE TO SAY NO. THIS MAN, A DOCTOR, HER BROTHER, IS PREDATOR OF THE WORST STRIPE, AN INCESTUOUS RAPIST. SHAME ON THE AUTHOR!!!! NOT SEXY AT ALL. GLORIFYING SUCH CRIMINALITY HAS NO REDEEMING SOCIAL VALUE WHATSOEVER!! IT IS AN UNDESERVED SLUR ON THE MEDICAL PROFESSION. BOO!! HIPPOCRATES IS WRETCHING IN HIS GRAVE!!!! SHAME, SHAME, SHAME!!

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by Anonymous01/21/16

Like

To wordsmith - description said it all, don't know why you would read it if you don't like this kind of stuff. Also it is just fiction...

Liked it, the naughtiness of it all took me there.

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by Anonymous02/16/16

It was OK

It made me jerk off but I've seen sexy try to work on it

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by Anonymous03/20/16

Great Story Short and Sweet

Nice
Just the day after pill and a Rx for birth control pills.
Oh and come back in a few days for a follow up exam.

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by Anonymous09/16/16

Great story, wish I was the happy doctor

By the way wordmaster, your an asshole it's only a story.
If you don't like it, why do you read it.
Read readers digest, stupid jerk.
Not Literotica, dumb ass.
Piss off, your probably a priest. lets not even go there!

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by Anonymous10/25/16

Help sister

We are in Canada. I am 21 sister. Brother is 22. We started back then.
Now we r doing it and we r happy I love these kind of stories.
I sister love my brother has been doing for long time. I sauced brother and removed his cloths and took his dik in mouth, Love hard hot dik go in me fast and hard/
Keep writing stories for girls like me

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by DrSemblance11/13/16

Damn, princess jennie.

I read that secret crush story and thought you would be writing about STEP siblings like in that one.

I do not want to read incest... not that you have this in the wrong category, and you gave plenty of fair warning,

but I thought because you had the other as step siblings in the incest category, the others would be too.

Oh well, i really enjoyed that one series anyways.

You write very well, very hot. But, I just had to stop reading this once I realized you were writing about blood relatives, and it seems like the rest is too.

So, I wont be reading any more :(

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by Anonymous11/30/16

just..

another rape..

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by Anonymous04/20/17

It is astonishing how many of these people don't know what rape is.

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by prop6904/24/17

Erotic, but Raping His Sister, come on. No consent or even asked for the sex

May be in the incest category, but really should be in
NonConsent/Reluctance and 20 years in jail and no medical license

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by Anonymous06/16/17

Ummm...

So he rapes his kid sister.
Also I always wondered why so many writers always put the maidenhead/cherry/hymen somewhere deep inside the vagina.

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by lowkeyone10/12/17

Ummmm.

I don't know. ??
And how did he get his dick in there while her feet were strapped in stirrups.

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