by BetinaCipher
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You are delicious as chocolate!
~BC
Goddamn you write really fucking well my friend. This story was hot! Well done Mistress of Scrabble.
I think I need to get myself to a chocolatier, stat! Fantastic writing and a great story!
Wow! Amazing work. Very well written. Totally took me with you into the wild ride and felt the sexual awakening she experienced! Very hot!
I enjoyed reading every single bit of it thou part of me wished it was longer than that. It could make a great series one which involves playing with emotions like their ex's coming back in the scene and staff
The author had me hooked when they were about to trade stories. But the really saucy, titillating, delicious, make-all-parts-of-my-body-respond descriptions of what (and who) went down later had me quite literally salivating. Couldn't stop reading.
When we find new friends we tend to walk softly at first. Then when we find the answers we hoped for it's beautiful. Well done with good description and feelings. Thanks