All Comments on 'The Perfect Treat'

by BetinaCipher

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

I enjoyed reading your story, I hope you continue it.

skinnysailorskinnysailorabout 7 years ago
More please

I hope i can read more of this sexy love story

BetinaCipherBetinaCipherabout 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you, skinny sailor and Anonymous!

Please make sure to cast a vote for me in the Valentine's Day contest!

You are delicious as chocolate!

~BC

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Goddamn you write

Goddamn you write really fucking well my friend. This story was hot! Well done Mistress of Scrabble.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Lovely

Very lovely... the build up to all those orgasms. Tasty treat!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I love chocolate just as much as I love pussy. Mmm delicious.

jodyleejodyleeabout 7 years ago
Well now!

I think I need to get myself to a chocolatier, stat! Fantastic writing and a great story!

plumberdonplumberdonabout 7 years ago
Lovely

I too love to eat both pussy and chocolate. Well done - Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Passion

Pure passion. Great writing little one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Seductively enthralling!

Wow! Amazing work. Very well written. Totally took me with you into the wild ride and felt the sexual awakening she experienced! Very hot!

evelynsuwilanjievelynsuwilanjiabout 7 years ago
Wonderful

I enjoyed reading every single bit of it thou part of me wished it was longer than that. It could make a great series one which involves playing with emotions like their ex's coming back in the scene and staff

CritiQalCritiQalabout 7 years ago
More delicious than fine chocolate

The author had me hooked when they were about to trade stories. But the really saucy, titillating, delicious, make-all-parts-of-my-body-respond descriptions of what (and who) went down later had me quite literally salivating. Couldn't stop reading.

plumberdonplumberdonabout 7 years ago
beautiful

When we find new friends we tend to walk softly at first. Then when we find the answers we hoped for it's beautiful. Well done with good description and feelings. Thanks

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