Irresistible

Nice story

Very hot, and well written. Just a suggestion based on a personal preference: go more into depth when the men climax in her. Otherwise, keep up the good work ;)

Of all the endings...! It's so simple and I never saw it coming. Only you could pull that one off with flair and make it sound like a little explosion in my head. Shot. As if I can afford to loose any more computing abilities.
There's something missing though...hmmm...yep, it's the 'Ch1' you forgot to put next to the heading. See, the old man had a few more vials with interesting names on them cluttering up his pack-up-and-bolt wares table.

As in - please?