Stone

The first one on your Idiot List

should be you for writing this crap.

If you'r shooting for the lowest score today with the most negative comments.

Congratulation! You've accomplished your goal. Satisfying feeling, isn't it?

Ah hell I didn't want to

but I'll add to the insults. After all, wouldn't want to disappoint LUEDON, my favorite whiner on this site. Author you suck at this, try another hobby, but then again, if being told you're a dick makes you feel good, by all means, continue.

Well Trolled

Yep, nicely trolled. Started to score it a 5 just to mess with the trolling but went along with it instead.

Hahaha

1. You've never had anything published.
2. Your writing style is childish. Are you 8 years old?
3. Throwing in random swearing doesn't make your writing more "butch".
4. Don't live in denial. You'll be happier once you admit you are gay.
5. This story bites.

hey 𝐒𝐖𝐈𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐑𝐅𝐀𝐆

now that you had your little fun (it takes so little to make you happy), you can go back slurping cum out of your wife's holes. there you go, that's a good boy.

PUKE!

MORE PUKE! STUPID FUCKING STORY. There isn't a man in this country that would do that, you ignorant fucking prick writer.

Boring and bad

Did the author troll through every cuck story submitted on Lit, it seems there was a little bit of one story, then a few lines of another, grab a sentence from the next one, add in a few more lines from a few more stories, then bingo! a new cuck story. 1*

What Utter Trash

All three of them are a waste of DNA and should be put out of our misery.

Get some self-respect man.

Hahaha!

WOW!

I've read bad but this is a new low!

It would be sad if I wasn't laughing!

BrainGym?

More like BrainlessGym

only a purebred cuck would write shit like this

swingerjoe is just a dumb troll

a lesser bonny/vastie. he posts moronic troll-bait stories and then congratulates himself when people tell him he is a retard. what an idiot.

if he died tomorrow the world would be a better place and no one wolud miss him. (maybe the wife would miss the income.)

1*

fag cuck shit.

@Anonymous Re: "Yes, but"

Excellent point about how hubby's character pulled a 180, from not even wanting his wife to TALK to Stone to cumming in his pants watching them fuck and going along with being her cuck.

@BrainGym

I'm glad you're so proud of yourself, deliberately writing a stupid story just to try to get a rise from people.

Why don't you put your "genius" to work to actually create something worth reading?

Hello, my enraged and crying little children. While you licked your wounds about being licked yesterday, I compiled my list of favorites. Before I list them for posterity, I want to thank each and every one of you; because aside from the endless source of joy and laughter your irrationally psychotic inability to separate fact from fiction has given me, you reminded me of something I'd half-forgotten (since I hang out with sane people): Crazies like you get seriously mega pissed when you're shown how crazy you are. Hilariously, you turn into wild, rabid ferrets. All to say, I'll be keeping this in mind for the future -- make of that what you will :)

As fun as this has been, I'll be going back to the land of the regular, non-crazy people very shortly, so don't expect further replies from me -- I'm about to make like Nero and fiddle while Rome burns. And you'll be the ones burning it with the torch I handed you :)

Without further ado, the top picks. Chosen based on the following criteria -- a, Humor; b, Stupidity; c, Abusiveness; d, Self-delusion. Hey, I guess it all boils down to humor, after all. Enjoy reading the proof of what sheeple you are.

10. by "Crkcppr": People , you've been played like a cheap guitar. I wouldn't read this story if someone held a gun to my head , but when I saw it had 80 some odd comments , I went through those . Very easy to see what some people think is so funny , let's poke the ferrets . Then run back to the boards and brag about it.Do you folks remember RLmann ?
That was Swingerjoe' s little mind fuck , sorta like this one . Maybe this kind of trolling (or fishing , hello Luedon) .I'd lay you great odds that this author is really Swingerjoe or FLC. Hope they enjoyed themselves .

9. by "rixels" :BrainGym? Or BrainStain? or BrainDrain? This story has an ending chosen to elicit angry comments for the amusement of the asshole author.

8. by "Impo_64": When you think the day at LW couldn't go worst...When you think the day at LW couldn't go worst...This shitty work shows up! At least it could have had one decent character, but no! This has a direct entry to the ten worst stories of all times in LW! Even worst than the Indian ones! Congratulations to the writer! He reached his goal: To piss off the readers! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

7. by Anonymous: re: BrainGym. Are you the scarecrow without a brain? If I was this author I'd be insulted to be compared to you.

6. by Anonymous: Go back to where you came from. Title says it all. Your story sucked stone's imaginary balls. Maybe you're Timmy?

5. by "paulskins": Wrong category. I really can not stress enough of how you need to put this poorly written, unoriginal, and unrealistic steaming pile of cow dung in the fetish category. I won't insult you personally, but I am tempted. At the very least, you could put a warning on it so I don't waste my time reading the first few paragraphs. Thanks for continuing a sad trend of loser husbands that do nothing when their wives are cheating whores.

4. by Anonymous: New All Time low. This story is an all time crap story with no redeeming value at all. Sorry that I can't give it a negative rating. I think this author is seriously mentally deranged.

3. by Anonymous: Trash , garbage, author is braindead, cannot be cured anymore 0

2. by Anonymous: A really stupid fucking story. You must really hate husbands to make them act like wimp to thier cheating whoring cunt wives. What Timmy should have done and it woyuld have made a much better story, would ahve been to have kick the sht out of Stone and ponded his ball to mush with a ball bat, then take Denise's wedding rings flatten them and then shove them so far up her shit hole they would go through her intestinal tract into her cumfilled stomach. One can only hope now that Timmy doesn't fuck the skanky cunt and she gets AIDS and DIES

1. by Anonymous: As she walked towards the door, he raised the bat. "Till death do us part." He repeated softly.

I just adore number one. Short, sweet and wonderfully subtle. Anyways...I know you'll react to this like the wild ferrets you are, but I also hope that in your quieter moments you reflect and see where you erred. A vain hope, I know. But maybe one day pigs will fly and a snowflake will stay frozen in hell. In my quieter moments, I'll be laughing. You won't hear from me again (and I'm sure this breaks your achy hearts), but having said that if I were you guys, I'd sleep with one eye open as I trawled Loving Wives.

Au revoir, my bitches! And with that I down the last gulp of champagne. It's been worth every damn minute.

gulp of champagne

more like a glass of piss, isn't that more to your liking. Do you take it up your ass daily too? You'll be back and entertain yourself little man, with the small dick, who can't satisfy the women so he has to come on a porn site to get satisfaction. Hahahahahahahahahahahah

Boo

Cucky boy. Consider this a reaction. lol, lol, lol, lol,lol,lol,lol, lol,lol

Did it ever occur to you

that you're also being played for a fool or are you to dumb to know that?
Read your story again and then ask yourself, what kind of idiot would write this?
Don't answer yourself because it would require a thought process, something you seem to lack. Only children would react to readers like you do. Wahwahwah, Mommy they hurt my feeling, so I'm going to huff and puff until they are nice to me. That's it isn't it, you can't take criticism so you beat your chest. Grow up.

Like mentioned before

This guy is brain dead. Something short circuited and gray matter is oozing out of his ears. Wonder if it's contagious?

1*

Nothing more needs to be said.

Pile of manure.

that includes your comments

Garbage

Just cut the sluts throat no wonder so many men in prison 4 murder with whores like that

Slirpuff

Telling someone to shoot himself,now, that's funny ,I don't care who you are.

Your top ten made me laugh. I especially love #1 also. Dude man has seen way too many episodes of that zombie show with the bat (terribly unoriginal). I know you won't be back which makes me sad. I liked your story. Now that may be because we're the same, or lovers, or fuck buddies, or related, or best friends, or a different personalty, or whatever they want us to be, but dude I thought you were cool and handled the hatred well. No offense, but glad they went after you like rabid beast and not me. At least I can sill write on this site. You might want to pick a new name. If that's really what you were going for, congratulations my friend.

what is your point exactly?

that if you write a "story" that no human being would like and people tell you that it sucks, then you win?

wow, swingerjoe, your IQ must be humongous!

Idiotic worthless stupid cuckshit!!! MINUS 5*!!!

Maybe that author is only brain sick then we know why he published that shit story!! If not, than he is only an idiot who likes to get humiliated and to be screwed!! I dont know whats worse!!! But if he is a brain sick idiot he can get mental help!!!

I'm laughing my ass off

The comments are awesome! Way better than the story. I'm just amazed at the anger out there. Even if you were a "serious" writer what purpose does it serve to shout you down?

Enraged

Great job I wanted to rip Stones throat out. I hated the character Stone but liked the story presentation

Enjoyed it.

Only thing I wished was that you didn't do the 180 turn with the wife being a hardcore slut. I liked the idea of her actually being a faithful wife seduced into having an affair. Either way, that desk scene was fucking hot and I hope you continue this story in part 2....maybe about how his wife and Stone now fuck freely now that Timmy knows and how it affects his life?

WOW

131 comments and almost all negative. That has to be a record. Never knew slime was that popular. The score even climbed .4 points. Amazing.

A waste of a good plot went downhill fast...

From good wife to insane slut just turning the page...you could have a higher rating in FETISH category(or with a WARNING at the beginning:willing cuckold).