Stone

Annoyed

Fine story, but I hate guys like Tim. I have no respect for him. He got what he deserved.

stop writing

this is cuck shit. everyone hate you. stop writing.

Stoned when writing no brainer story

A dumbass author with a dumbass cuckold fetish BORING ASS

Sorry thought this story had some balls in it...

Too Bad

You've been writing for a long time

I feel sorry for you, if this is the best you can do for your first loving wives story. Same shit, different day. Grow up.1*

BrainGone

Should have put cuckold in the tags.Waste of time.Unrealistic drivel.

Cuck Shit

Glad I only wasted two pages on this!

"Then maybe you should have told me without yelling." – He had told her many times, but she kept pooh-poohing his concerns.

"You'll never see me talking to him again” – I can see where this is going; yeah, he’ll never SEE it because it’ll be behind his back!

He SHOULD have beaten the crap out of her, DEFINITELY not accepted the situation. He should have grabbed the ring off her finger, breaking it if he had to, and walked away.

I blame myself.

As soon as I read the adult male protagonist was named "Timmy," I should have known we were in Wimp Ass Cuckold territory. But no, I went ahead and read it anyway. If you put a cuckold disclaimer up front you won't get any 1-votes from me. No disclaimer gets a 1-vote every time.

If this is your first

let it be your last in loving wives. Got enough of this type of trash, don't really need more. 1*

Go back to where you came from

Title says it all. Your story sucked stone's imaginary balls. Maybe you're Timmy?

Don't think this is your first time

You've obviously mastered the fine art of trolling. This is not sexy, so it must have been written as an exercise in pissing people off. Now that you've got your jollies, back to well deserved obscurity.

way to make an impression in the LW category

i hated it but that's because it's not my bag. so he learns his wife steps out and he accepts it. so what?

thanks!

thank you all for these beautiful comments on my talent for storytelling, thank you so much for all the 5* votes i love seeing my story is doing so well. i love this loving wives caturgoury! i love my fans, thank you!!!

Wrong category

I really can not stress enough of how you need to put this poorly written, unoriginal, and unrealistic steaming pile of cow dung in the fetish category. I won't insult you personally, but I am tempted. At the very least, you could put a warning on it so I don't waste my time reading the first few paragraphs. Thanks for continuing a sad trend of loser husbands that do nothing when their wives are cheating whores.

Fucked story Fucked up author

Horseshit story. Waste of space. Please go back to the shallow end of the intelligence swamp and become one with the fish shit.

ok sucks a wimp

ok i will need to see if ya a male or femmie.

you are hilarious

With your sarcastic comment about your fans liking story knowing full well they didn't.
Obviously you truly enjoy the humiliated husband angle. I have met a number of those types. More importantly I have met their wives.
Comments pointing readers and writers to a certain Facebook profile have appeared in numerous comments. Many people mistakenly think it is scam. IT IS NOT!!
I haven't been back in some time so could be profile no longer exists
HOWEVER!!! WIFE AND DETAILED ON THAT PROFILE ARE VERY SIMILAR TO ONES IN YOUR STORY.
SHE-I KNOW HER PERSONALLY AND BIBLICALLY CONTINUES TO HAVE AFFAIR AFTER AFFAIR. HE IS 3RD HUSBAND-MARRIED 1993-HE HAS KNOWN FOR CLOSE TO 20 YEARS OF HER CHEATING
HER HAVING MULTIPLE AFFAIRS CONCURRENTLY-HER ENGAGEMENT IN THREEWAY
HE DOES NOTHING FEARFUL OF LOSING HER
SHE IS CRUEL AND INDISCREET BRAGGING ABOUT AFFAIRS.
FOR 13 MONTHS OF 10 YEARS THAT SHE WAS COLLEGE INSTRUCTOR IN HELENA MONTANA EVERY FRIDAY NIGHT SHE DROPPED HER THONG PANTIES ON FLLOR OF BATHROOM FOR HIM TO PICK UP AND PRESS AND RUB ON FACE WHILE SHE BATHED. HE WAS GETTING AROUSED FOR HIS FRIDAY NIGHT BLOWJOB.
THING IS SHE HAD COERCED YOUNGER MARRIED MALE STUDENT INTO FUCKING HER AND MADE SURE HER PANTIES WERE FULL OF MUSCULAR BIG COCKED STUDENT'S TWO HUGE CREAMY LOADS. PLENTY OF TIME TO OOZE OUT ON HER 60 MILE COMMUTE HOME TO THREE FORKS MONTANA

The perfect catagory

I enjoyed it. Thank you. 5*****

Garbage

Ok story but the wife is too outrageous and the wimpiness if the husband is absurd. If he was a real person, I'd advise him to kill her and then himself

1*

wimpy cuck shit.

Absolutely fucking.

Outstanding piece of trolling.
I did actually read it and fucking hated it with a passion.
Well played BrainGym :)

Cums in his pants?

Is there no end to this crazy pathetic cuck shit?

He should walk

He should walk if not run away from the bitch as fast as he can. Even if she needs to fuck around with others, she disrespected him in front of him. That shows absolutely NO respect or love for him, or herself. Id she needs to denigrate him while cheating, then there isn't anything to keep the marriage together.

Once her body goes, no one will want here and she won't have anything wish will serve her right.

It was a good story until... Whats with you , Your a twisted sick pussy

who write ths garbage

what kind of man would want or stay with this kind of woman? I'm glad I just glad I skimmed through this, what ever it is, like I do with most of the other submissions on this site in the last few months. All I've got to say is there are a lot of sickos posting and reading the garbage being posted. Just a bunch of fags and cuckolds , no men

thanks again!!

ah, my dear children of the lubbing wibbes cataugoury, thanks for all these beautiful comments. i love you all. you're all my babies!! even in my wildest dreams i never imagined to have such success on this site!!! i put all my heart and soul into writing this story and am glad it has paid off. i love this. i promise all you adoring fans of mine that i'll be back with more wonderful stories for your reading pleasuuurrre! keep the praise and 5* coming in, my children!! let 'em roll in!

I don't usually comment on stories, but I feel bad people are attacking you since this is your first post here. I liked your story. It isn't garbage or shit. So what he stays with her, some men do that. 5* all the way.

yes, my baby!

thank you MindBlown75, another adoring fan!! this is indeed a 5* story. thank you, my babies!! thank you, all my children. i love you all!!!

Total shit

Complete, total shit.

Dude, your story is at 1.50

Why make it worse by making asshole comments? That's the worst score I've ever seen at this point in the day. It's clearly a fail. Just learn and move on.

"Are you going to leave me?"

Why is he asking this? Yes this is third person, but you included enough of his thoughts and feelings that this is contrary to everything that happened before. You set up a guy who should have been using his phone to record it and leave her. Then you just changed without anything to back it up.

Yes, but

Even in a fantasy there must be some connection to how people really act. Here, you gave us no indication that Tim was a sub or had visions of being a cuck. In fact he objected to wifey even talking to Stone. So, his reaction to the cheating was too difficult to accept, and thus you get so much negative responses.

not my cup of tea

I won't criticize your story. It was well written. The ending didn't thrill me but it's your story. Don't listen to nay sayers if you like it go for it.

KNOWLEDGE IS ONLY DANGEROUS

when you wimp out knowing, TK U MLJ LV NV

Trash!!!

This story is Garbage!!!

Waste of time

Total shit of a story. Please don't write any more.

New All Time low

This story is an all time crap story with no redeeming value at all. Sorry that I can't give it a negative rating. I think this author is seriously mentally deranged.

Waste

Story started off great from the catching of the wife until the end sucked !

One of the worse stories on the site

Just disgusting ending!

Trash , garbage, author is braindead, cannot be cured anymore

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Author Here

Okay, so I think it's time for another comment. An honest one this time. I'm laughing my head off, dudes. You know what's so awesome about you guys? That I can knock out this story on a keyboard in about 2 hours and then just sit back with a glass of chilled champagne and duck rolls while my cuckold tale ruins your lives and sends you into a tailspin of anger, despair, pain and rage. I've laughed so much that I have abs like Stone's. Keep the comments rolling in guys, you've really made my attempt to ruin your lives worth it.
@swedishreader1: we all gotta get our kicks somehow, eh?
And the best part? Only 2 commenters figured out that y'all have royally made dimwits out of yourselves by believing this was an actual, serious story and that my previous comments were nothing but ruses to egg you on. Now, I'm back to sipping my chilled champagne and laughing at your butt-hurt comments.
And on that note...please keep the 5* votes coming, my adoring baby fans!!! Hahahaha.

It started well but...

then it seemed to fall off a very high cliff of cliches.

Dear Anon - here's a clue

This tale was penned for a particular purpose which has been accomplished -- as is proved by your belief in its supposed realism. You got more than straw between your ears? Oh, man. This has been such a blast. But I'm outta here for now. Play nice, children!

and keep the 5* coming, of course ;)

So much for the conspiracy theory about Laurel sweeping out the 1* scores

Congratulations, BrainGym. With an average score to date of 1.47, there must have been readers other than yourself who scored this more than 1*. Amazing.

And a small note to the complaining commentariat: Don't ever delude yourself that somebody goes fishing to provide pleasure for the fish.

Lue

Wow

You are not only a lousy writer but you're also a dick.

What utter rubbish, you're just another 1* cuck writer determined to piss off the readers with your poorly written cuck rubbish. It's not even original. You say you've published plenty, but where?

BrainGym?

Brain Dead more like.

@luedon

Every time you open your mouth you say something stupid. Don't be any more moronic than you have to be.

Everyone knows the site does sweeps. They have said they do sweeps, with their own words. It's a fact and only an idiot doesn't know it. They aren't done every day. Sometimes, it takes several months. Sometimes it takes a week. They always happen before a contest is concluded. You should just stop talking. Do you want a link to the thread that talks about sweeps? No, fuck that. Look it up yourself, stupid.

Worst story ever.

Hated it 1*

absolute

worst story on here or at least tied for worst I do agree it took stones to write this bull shit