All Comments on 'Not a Proper Young Man Anymore'
by Jake_Knight
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 7 years agoHey Alden shes all yours! Have a nice life Im outta here.Hey Alden you take over the payments and the whore.See ya!!!! I think Mr Sproule moves on.
Impo_64about 7 years ago1st phrase: "Alden... such a proper young man, his family was basically aristocratic"! "basically aristocratic"? What this means? Or all were "basically aristocratic"? Like: She was the Queen of the whores, Mr. Sproule the King of the cuckolds and finally Alden the Bull prince? Was this an aristocratic nonsense comedy? Not funny at all...1*
droogeabout 7 years agoThis was pretty standard fare for a cuckold story and it was delivered almost dispassionately by the underdeveloped characters.
I'm not into the Cuckold scene but I do enjoy reading them at times. Usually they can tap into my emotions such as anger and frustration, pride and ego. Unfortunately I felt none of these things and with the story being so brief there was no plot with which I could relate.
I gave your story 3* because I realize I'm not your target readership. A man who fantasizes of becoming a Cuckold might find this highly erotic...
I would suggest that you show respect at all times to your target audience and never try and palm off on them what looks and feels like a copy and paste story.
Jake_Knightabout 7 years agoAuthorAll of you have no idea of how much I enjoy the rabid, frustrated, self-righteous comments on the Loving Wives section. I made this story out of boredom and it's truly giving me more smirks and entertainment than I expected. Don't worry, I won't ever delete them nor block voting, on the contrary, please don't stop the constant amusement.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI think the story is a laugh, and the author is ridiculous.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoNo one gives a flying fuck what you think or say or do. So shut your sorry ass mouth and try and forget your wife was fucking the fleet!
Anonymousabout 7 years agoWhich anony you talking to bonniecunt. You do realize there are thousands of us?
Anonymousabout 7 years agothere is a category called "interracial". Use it next time. So, you're amused by the comments, we'll I'm ashamed for you posting something like this. About as erotic as watching paint dry.
