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All Comments on 'Ms. Semone's Valentine's Panty Line'

by SoutheastPaddler

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Rushed

This is incoherent. You need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Huh?

??????????????

PrfsrPrfsrabout 7 years ago
First sentence, not more

Finding an error in the first sentence, I knew I couldn't go more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

What the fuck was that?! Terrible plot, terrible writing, in serious NEED of an editor. This was NOT romance, certainly not a 'hot' romance you seem to think it is.

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