All Comments on 'Own Me, Mistress'

This was great. The only thing that would make it better is if Mistress took her payment in the form of Jennifer orally pleasing her.

Well written and extremely graphic. Good, but not great, description of Jennifer's feelings. Will we get Keith's feelings in the next episode?

Interesting and well-written, but you can do more.

How was Jennifer dressed, for example - is there room for tittilation there or for describing clothes that set a mood? How might Jennifer dress for an anniversary dinner about which she has opinions? You are on the right track.

this was a great story of two people that have a great life but their love was just stale and had to be recharged which it was.....hopefully the story will continue and the teacher......MISTRESS.....will be invited back and she will teach them more ways how to go on a adventure of heightning their sexual pleasure more and maybe showing of multiple partners in their new way of sexual pleasure......i cannot wait for the story to continue.......HOPEFULLY

When Jennifer was about to cum the mistress could have finished her off with her tongue and they could both of shared her husbands cock and both tasted his cum

This is such a truly believable and extremely erotic story. I absolutely loved it and would give it 6* if possible. I'm sure most couples would benefit from "help" like this.

Another hot story & well written! MORE PLEASE!!

Mistress could return if Jennifer needs a refresher or if Jennifer has a girl friend (or another married couple) who also needs the service--perhaps with hubby's help.

Definitely needs a sequel.

Every marriage needs a tune-up. My late wife's was five years. Please continue with additional chapters. Thanks for the story.