All Comments on 'How I banged My Lesbian Sister'

Good one!

Needs a follow up. :)

Need a part 2 where she gets revenge on her bro

Haha, it needs a second.

Great story, funny

Keep it going

Rape.

Great story .Keep going

Fun.....needs to be continued....

I like non-consent stories, but this is nothing but out and out rape.

is 'Semen'??

Would have to be a VERY large dick to ejaculate 'Seamen'!!!!

The girlfriend doesn't know where the bathroom is? Blindfold or not men and women don't have the same haircut. You can always tell a real dick from a fake one.

This is my second porn story and already I'm not feeling this. I wanted to try my hand at writing smut with ridiculous plots and so far both of my stories have gotten some good feedback (really I'm surprised at how well they were received), but this isn't satisfying anymore. I think I just needed to get some weird Freudian crap out of my system. If you want to have these stories for a later read feel free to copy them, I'll be deleting them soon with my profile. I'd like to thank all of the people out there who took the time to read my adult-material, no matter how brief it might have been. And a special thanks to all those who wrote disturbing and inappropriate things to me, you are the ones I will remember the most, you sick freaks.

All the best,

-EasySleazy

Disgusting. Lesbians dont want to fuck men and the sister clearly didnt want to fuck her brother. There was never consent. This is plainly rape.

Please add another chapter

Great last line, for a difficult situation. Better get this story ready for an upcoming sitcom!

Ok I did the roflol !!! That was funny

Why delete it though? I can understand you not wanting to write anything else like this, but why not keep the story up? It's your decision, but I don't really see a reason not to. Great work either way.

........full of silly errors e.g.

""Common already," Susan moaned. He forcefully grabbed me by my hair and shoved my face into her crotch."

Don't be in such a hurry to publish, read and edit or get someone to do it for you.

Great concept but really crappy grammar. Once you learn to write the story might get me off.

Just be sure to give it that extra one over to polish it up and proofread

It was erotic. Not novel material, but still hot.

I gave it five stars cause it made me laugh at the end.

5 stars I laughed my ass off!!! Excellent

Have the brother take over

Brh you good!!! I laughed so hard at the end I fell off my chair nice ending looking forward to reading more of your stories

Man you have to finish it

Not only did Brother screw his bitchy lesbian sister physically but he fucked his sisters evil girlfriend mentally by fucking her girlfriend.So now both sister and girlfriend have problems,they can either pretend that Brother didn't fuck Sister and gave her a mindblowing orgasm and go back to having regular lesbian sex or choose to accept her brother and have a lesbian/straight 3some with the brother.

Either way the winner will still be the Brother cause the girlfriend will probably hate that the brother fucked his sister and she ain't gonna want the sister after brother got his rocks off in her most likely,but if the gf knows whats good for her she will accept the brother cause I think sister has been somewhat de-lesbianized and is now bisexual.I think the story should continue.

That's soooooo fucked up. Man that was a great read. A couple miscues in spelling but good none the less. Enjoyed seeing his bitch of a sister get her comeuppance!!!

PLEASE KEEP THIS ONE GOING.

Hahaha I loved it, well done. Made me chuckle at the end..

The ending was priceless.

You confused your personal pronouns, and the word is semen, not seamen. It is sex and does not pertain to a ship.

Great one. I laughed so hard.

That was fun.

ROFLMAO-too funny-loved it!!!

Awesome. But wouldnt Susan feel the difference between a dildo and a dick when he first went in or was she too into it to notice?

This is rape. Put it in the nonconsent category, or commit to deleting it like you originally proposed.