All Comments on 'Surprise Ch. 02'

by JTC2008

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JTC2008JTC2008about 7 years agoAuthor
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Sorry for the 2 or 3 slight spelling errors. I find I can't edit now it's been published.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Feedback and comments...

….are welcome you say but mine was deleted even though it was only about word meaning!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Yes, a nice hot story about his sister who has now become a hot babe who knows what she wants ...... Now once she wakes up maybe she'll want him to do her again but near the high point, is take her from behind and shove his hot, hard, big cock into her ? He should do that and drown her with his cum ( figuratively speaking ).

They might even develop a relationship... so many possibilities. Thank you.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
Short but fantastic

Hope you will have more chapter as she becomes a woman....Screw Sandie. Unless she wants to join in

Robinius1Robinius1about 7 years ago
Very Nice!

I think I'd like more about this couple if you feel like writing a third chapter. I'm intrigued by Alex's change of attitude toward her brother. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
No morning piss?

Most people need one in the morning, bacon or no bacon :-)

WmsraubWmsraubabout 7 years ago
MORE!

Don't stop please, you need to continue please!

sabra16023sabra16023about 7 years ago
Outstanding Story

Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

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