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Surprise Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by JTC200802/05/17

Spelling

Sorry for the 2 or 3 slight spelling errors. I find I can't edit now it's been published.

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by Anonymous02/05/17

Feedback and comments...

….are welcome you say but mine was deleted even though it was only about word meaning!

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by Anonymous02/05/17

Yes, a nice hot story about his sister who has now become a hot babe who knows what she wants ...... Now once she wakes up maybe she'll want him to do her again but near the high point, is take her from behind and shove his hot, hard, big cock into her ? He should do that and drown her with his cum ( figuratively speaking ).

They might even develop a relationship... so many possibilities. Thank you.

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by prop6902/05/17

Short but fantastic

Hope you will have more chapter as she becomes a woman....Screw Sandie. Unless she wants to join in

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by Robinius102/05/17

Very Nice!

I think I'd like more about this couple if you feel like writing a third chapter. I'm intrigued by Alex's change of attitude toward her brother. Thanks for sharing!

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by Anonymous02/06/17

No morning piss?

Most people need one in the morning, bacon or no bacon :-)

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by Wmsraub02/06/17

MORE!

Don't stop please, you need to continue please!

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by sabra1602302/06/17

Outstanding Story

Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

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