Loving My Best Friend's Dad Ch. 02

Great Beginning

This story has great potential. Please continue

Loving this...

Nice

Well, the cat came out of the bag.
Now I hope you follow the romantic part and not just the sex part. I know that the author commented that this was a romantic story and without sex (or just not too much), sincerely, I hope it continues like this.
I have no daughters, only one son, but I have many sisters-in-law and two sisters, so I think you understand me ... right?
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

You Need An Editor

Nice pacing and build-up (as was your first chapter), but mistakes in grammar, punctuation and tense abound. Ex: too and to don't mean the same thing. That said, I'll move on to (not too) chapter 3.