Good Idea

Brilliant story!

I loved the backstory and the build-up, David's character development was good, and the sex was really hot! I love that she knew it was him, it relieved the need for a creepy/cringey 'reveal' moment, and I liked the ending, leave room for future stories, which I hope there will be!!

Well developed story

Well written, good story development.

Fantastic story, one of the best I've read on here in the last couple of years. Good job.

Best rape fantasy I have ever read.

I get it

Totally understand where she's coming from. Great write!!

Wonderful

Really hot. Very much enjoyed it.

DON'T STOP WRITING

Perfect fantasy for a shy sub like myself. Thank you. Just need to find a man as perfect as this one.

One of my very favorites

Such a great story - loved the buildup and the interaction. I really hope we get to read more about the two of them.

Very Powerful Story

This story really shook me up.
I am a daily reader of new stories on Literotica.
I like a lot of different genres: feet, incest, mom & dad incest, older-younger, senior sex. I have saved a very extensive library of stories.

But I don't think I have ever saved a NONCONSENT story until this one. The character build up was amazing. I tend to be more of romance-submissive kind of guy, but the David character drew me in so much that I felt I might do exactly what he did to win the heart of the heart of the woman he had fallen in love with.

So in the end this became a Romance story. The journey was difficult, but was so very worth it!!!

Thank you,
SoleBrotherJeff