Characters and activity very well structured with both romance and sex.
I enjoyed your story
Yes, you've written a lovely, sexy story, but more importantly, your writing and character development was excellent.
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Very well written! (okay, not an original comment)
Characters and activity very well structured with both romance and sex.
Merci beaucoup
I enjoyed your story
Lovely story.
Yes, you've written a lovely, sexy story, but more importantly, your writing and character development was excellent.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Gabrielle or
More submissions by Kalavo.