All Comments on 'Becoming a Shemale's slave'

Really bad. Garbage..

What's with the obsession with demeaning him and put spit and snot into his mouth?. Unnecessary and gross. Shemales should be loving, not bitches.

It’s hard to find stories like these. Really hope you don’t get discouraged by negative comments and to continue writing more.

What a gross story! The snot was way over the top and made me wish I had not read it!

Such a sexy and hot story, more please, Bobby´s cock need to be inside Sissy´s Scottt´s sluty ass hehe

I’ve just written a comment on another of your stories. I thought I’d read this one in the hope that the other was a one-off. Not so. Read the comment because it applies to this story as well.

The quote above explains it all. I hope you understand it. If not a half decent editor should be able to tell you.

So fucking hot, thank you!

Is there a part 2 where he could lick her feet clean?

Mmm more plz goddess. I would love more. To be used any way u wish. I'm ur slave and property nothing more. Only purpose is to serve.

The writing is not great but the you have to love such a domme