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Timing and References
First, I'm glad that you are moving the turning process along. I understand that the story is compressing itself into a smaller time frame, but those injuries would be touch-and-go (high death risk) in a MAJOR hospital.
Second, in case nobody caught it, the story about a little girl who fell, had her open wound licked by wolf pups, and was infected enough to turn IS a reference to events in the series DOMINANT SPECIES.
My UNofficial opinion... it feels like it would be considered Fair-Use (way to hard/expensive to dispute) in US courts.
Great story
Please continue as you are. I enjoy your writing style and the story line is marvelous.
Still a very good story.
I look forward to the next chapters. I find that the modified punctuation in the last two chapters make it easier to follow. I personally listen to a lot of Lit stories being read by my IPhone and the style of this chapter flows much better. Thanks.
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