All Comments on 'Our After Party'

that was hot... thanx so much... i loved it!!!

Well written & deftly rendered first person story. Very nice indeed :)

Rebecca you made me wet which is the best comment I can give anyone. The story was done with a tremendously good style also. I liked the nipple biting and tweaking part especially and it all flowed along so well. Thank you for writing this for me to enjoy reading.

That was very hot, clit rings are quite sexy and the build up was nice.

good job girl.

Still smiling. i enjoyed the read very much. jealous of the piercing.. maybe one day..

more, beccylea.. more!

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Great story!!!!! Please keep up the great work ... I will continue reading it!!!!

Very well done indeed. My husband has me writing an erotica story, which I have never done before, and you have given me some insperation. Thank you so much. Hopefully I will be able to post mine on this site as well when it is finished.

ZdeVska

You're right baby, I hadn't read this before. Whew. It has a nice pace to it, a flowing speed where I wanted to read as fast as I could to see where it was going to finish. And yet finish is precisely what you don't want it to do....

God damn, that was insanely hot. I love the build up (meaning the grinding and party). Grinding in general always gets me going. Same goes for teasing. And in most stories I read there's almost always something that turns me off a bit. Nothing in your story turned me off. It was hot knowing that it was real. The age range is good, too. I hate reading stories about older people because I'm not. So yeah. AND, I like not being the only one who doesn't wear underwear. lol.

I loved every bit of it! Keep writting<3