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a little too long
You write a great stroker, my only criticism is this... Emma only has so many holes for Jeff to fill after that it gets a little repetitious...your adding other characters was great All and all it was a good story. I will give it five stars though I thought it was a little too long.
thank you
thank you as always, your stories are so hot!! so many loving blowjobs :) ...
Emma's poor butt doesn't know how much trouble it's in
That brief exchange of teasing from both Jeff on Emma's actual anus and her flexing it a little while pushing back? Yeah, her ass is on the chopping block to be absolutely plundered by Jeff - and with how long (Thank you Dex) this story was, there will be plenty of writing space to really explore Jeff pushing his niece's anal boundaries HARD.
Re-submission?
Was this story condensed and re-submitted? I ask because i know ive read this story before. Anyways, rated 5 stars. Was good the first time i read it and was again this time.
bad choice of words
Over all it was a good story I read it over 14 days at work. My only complaint is that some of the words you used gave me bad thoughts. like "tore" i was thinking every time oh all the blood. And beach ball no way I can think to stack them would look good as a teen girl. some of the words you used became repetitive as it was such a long story. But in the end it was a good read and I will read the next one in the story ark.
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