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In the Darkness of Night

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by lostandfounder06/26/04

Not bad

Not bad, plays more like a song than a poem, but i think it works. The repitition gets a little bit stale in my opinion. Still, overall, nice stuff.

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by wildcat1971_200006/29/04

Wonderful

I know exactly what you're saying, Cinders. Though I may be loved and needed by those who surround me, it still doesn't stop me from longing for that one special one. May we all find that part of our soul that we seek.

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by Amyfriend02/01/07

I liked it...

but the repetition is a little overwhelming..

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