Well then the answer has to be they move away to where they are not known and live as wife and hubby. fuck the rules cause you just cannot help who your heart falls in love with.
I hope we get to read more of this story
My dad had a daughter 2 years before I was born who I didn't even know about until I was around 12 or so. His ex-wife was one evil bitch, and went to extremes (like threatening to have my mother killed while she was pregnant with me) to keep my half-sister from ever knowing her own father. I didn't meet my half-sister until I was 17, but from the day I learned of her existence I was terrified of this very scenario happening to me. When I finally did meet her, I was instantly attracted to her, but thankfully her abrasive personality turned me off enough to keep anything from ever happening. Yeah, I can personally attest to the legitimacy of Genetic Sexual Attraction.
Ironically, this story is even more bizarrely familiar because I am actually from Mississippi, and my half-sister worked at jobs just like Isbell. Although I damn sure ain't no cowboy.
You are pretty good at writing a story from a girls point of view , makes me wonder. As for the love story it seems to have a trueness flowing out of it . only you know . Thank you for your time writing it ,it was sad, happy, hopefully, then really sad at the end . But that's what makes great stories .More chapters please!
I liked the way you developed the relationship. However, you need a different way for them to find out they're related. Mississippi stopped requiring blood tests for marriage July 1st, 2012. And a blood test would have been for syphilis, rubella and the like, not a DNA cross-match. However, being related, their marriage would have been incestuous and void, after the fact. Same net result.
I also appreciate you noting the use of the story as a catharsis to get rid of old fears.
Keep writing!
Eidetic: timelines work out. If you do the math, Isbell was stated to be 18 in 2004, and was "now" 24, setting the story around 2010, so blood tests were still required.
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Anonymous02/09/17
Brother and Sister .
LOVED your story and what a kicker at the close ! Checking out if you`ve any more Stories on Literotica !
AUTHOR COMMENT. PLEASE READ BEFORE COMMENTING. I may add this note to the story in the future...
Please don't comment on whether or not their love should be legally or socially condoned. This is not the point of and has nothing whatsoever to do with the fear expressed in my story. The blood test law from 2010 when the story took place did not do DNA matching, nor therefore did police demand you show up at the county clerk's office to arrest you. This was a fabrication used to turn the story quickly. That's it.
I felt a great need all of my life to have a biological connection to family. I believed my whole life that my way of having a biological connection was to have children. Others who are adopted could find their long lost family, still others both. I'm positive that many who are adopted feel the same way.
Faced with the extremely sudden realization of being in love with a biological sibling that didn't exist a minute earlier, Isbell crashed not knowing how to proceed. Is finding her family enough? Is the need for biological children greater? (Please don't comment whether or not you believe that biological brothers and sisters having children is a good idea. It's different to someone who has no known biological link in the world.)
I don't know what I would do because I've never been faced with the situation and haven't wasted time thinking it through. Therefore I don't know what the tragic couple of this story will do. It's more important to me that you, the reader, fill in the blanks in your own way. I, as the writer, am more interested in sparking your imagination if I can.
If you have any thoughts about what you would do in Isbell's shoes at the end on an instinctual level or have had similar feelings of a desire for biological connectivity and would like to share, please do!
This won't be my only incest/taboo story, so please don't read into my opinion.
Well written, well thought out, and excellently staged. The endingof this chapter was delivered with flare and it begs a follow up possibly a serial to it.
To the nit pickers and trolls, if you can do better then do it or keep your comments to yourselves.
English
Good one
Hope to read more
Beautiful love story
Nice to have such a pleasant fanticy
Oh fuck
Well then the answer has to be they move away to where they are not known and live as wife and hubby. fuck the rules cause you just cannot help who your heart falls in love with.
I hope we get to read more of this story
I know the feeling...
My dad had a daughter 2 years before I was born who I didn't even know about until I was around 12 or so. His ex-wife was one evil bitch, and went to extremes (like threatening to have my mother killed while she was pregnant with me) to keep my half-sister from ever knowing her own father. I didn't meet my half-sister until I was 17, but from the day I learned of her existence I was terrified of this very scenario happening to me. When I finally did meet her, I was instantly attracted to her, but thankfully her abrasive personality turned me off enough to keep anything from ever happening. Yeah, I can personally attest to the legitimacy of Genetic Sexual Attraction.
Ironically, this story is even more bizarrely familiar because I am actually from Mississippi, and my half-sister worked at jobs just like Isbell. Although I damn sure ain't no cowboy.
I hope there is more. Very good story!
Your bio says your male
You are pretty good at writing a story from a girls point of view , makes me wonder. As for the love story it seems to have a trueness flowing out of it . only you know . Thank you for your time writing it ,it was sad, happy, hopefully, then really sad at the end . But that's what makes great stories .More chapters please!
Interesting, but...
I liked the way you developed the relationship. However, you need a different way for them to find out they're related. Mississippi stopped requiring blood tests for marriage July 1st, 2012. And a blood test would have been for syphilis, rubella and the like, not a DNA cross-match. However, being related, their marriage would have been incestuous and void, after the fact. Same net result.
I also appreciate you noting the use of the story as a catharsis to get rid of old fears.
Keep writing!
are you adding an other chpater
what next
Re: interesting, but...
Eidetic: timelines work out. If you do the math, Isbell was stated to be 18 in 2004, and was "now" 24, setting the story around 2010, so blood tests were still required.
Brother and Sister .
LOVED your story and what a kicker at the close ! Checking out if you`ve any more Stories on Literotica !
As for Ethan and Isbell...
AUTHOR COMMENT. PLEASE READ BEFORE COMMENTING. I may add this note to the story in the future...
Please don't comment on whether or not their love should be legally or socially condoned. This is not the point of and has nothing whatsoever to do with the fear expressed in my story. The blood test law from 2010 when the story took place did not do DNA matching, nor therefore did police demand you show up at the county clerk's office to arrest you. This was a fabrication used to turn the story quickly. That's it.
I felt a great need all of my life to have a biological connection to family. I believed my whole life that my way of having a biological connection was to have children. Others who are adopted could find their long lost family, still others both. I'm positive that many who are adopted feel the same way.
Faced with the extremely sudden realization of being in love with a biological sibling that didn't exist a minute earlier, Isbell crashed not knowing how to proceed. Is finding her family enough? Is the need for biological children greater? (Please don't comment whether or not you believe that biological brothers and sisters having children is a good idea. It's different to someone who has no known biological link in the world.)
I don't know what I would do because I've never been faced with the situation and haven't wasted time thinking it through. Therefore I don't know what the tragic couple of this story will do. It's more important to me that you, the reader, fill in the blanks in your own way. I, as the writer, am more interested in sparking your imagination if I can.
If you have any thoughts about what you would do in Isbell's shoes at the end on an instinctual level or have had similar feelings of a desire for biological connectivity and would like to share, please do!
This won't be my only incest/taboo story, so please don't read into my opinion.
loved it
Well written, well thought out, and excellently staged. The endingof this chapter was delivered with flare and it begs a follow up possibly a serial to it.
To the nit pickers and trolls, if you can do better then do it or keep your comments to yourselves.
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