All Comments on 'My Big Sister'

Only a woman wants what a woman needs this story tells the deepest thoughts of a woman in need so sweet. The way it is laid out is superb "keep" it UP

Great tease followed by extended relief. And, the first thing he did is eat her. Excellent!

I just wish there would be a sequel. Thanks for sharing your tale.

...must have one heck of an ego. Lit gives the authors the tool to erase comments they don't like. And what legal right do you think you have here? I do believe the BULLSHIT sign should hang from your neck. Just the thoughts of another struggling author on lit.

this such an ass wipe site that allows stupid ego maniac writers the so called right to delete public comments but won't allow the readers to delete stupid ass wipe stories if the writers have the power to delete comments then the readers should have the right to delete stories fair is fair only a insucure writer would delete bad comments and only allow good if you can't take the bad either stop writing or stop accepting all comments man up or get off the site

no way would he hang around after beining ignored by his parents and haveing to listen to them brag about his sister all the time when she said she was coming home he would have found a way to stay at a friends or go camping anything so he wouldn't have to be around her it goes againat human nature especially the end where they fuck no way would it happen in any stretch of the immagination

this and all comments are protected by internet copyright law and can not be deleted or tampered with without the writers consent to do so is illegal and carries fines and jail time

This was a hot and very believable story of the love and lust that can be shared by two siblings. I especially liked the part where he stayed at home to see his sister even though his parents had made him feel so inferior and insecure. That just showed how much guts the guy really had. As for some of the other comments, the authors of those comments need to realize this section is for comments to the author not for their personal crusades. I personally think it was a good story and those that don't like it can go for a hike and cool off.

as with most writers here this one needs to learn how to write a believable story or learn to put them in the fantasy area i feel like i went to the twilight zone with this one.

I really enjoyed your story. The last Anonymous commentor does not know the difference between fiction and biography. Fiction is fantasy.

fiction and fantasy are two different things fiction HAS to be based on reality and HAS to be believable fantasy does not this is pure fantasy and needs to be in that area

People group a story like this with Fiction(meaning not true), while we group something like say.......Lord of the Rings with fantasy(not in reality). By the way good job L.A. Wicker keep on writing!!

Guy,don't give a shit about some comments!!They simply do not know what they are talking about.I think they are jealous people or just don't know what is the word <fantasm>!!.The story has been well written and is very xciting.When I view incest clips sister/brother,auntie/nephew,I know pretty well that most of the models are not siblings.So when I look at these clips,I just think in my head that they are siblings!!That's so simple as that!! L.A.,plse keep it on and write a 2 nd chapter.Thks.

just your typical unrealistic unbelievable piece of trash that would never happen in a million years. only an underage virgin would think this was a good story.

I thought the story had a great build up and an awsome sex scene ,but then right at the end, he had to fuck it up buy saying he was going to ask her to marry him....went from sexy to stupid,,,,oh well

eish if that was my sister i will fuck her four days straight ,get married to that girl

All your stories have you being built, handsome, tall, with a fat 9" cock; is it because you're really a weedy little pencil dick who writes unrealistic wank fantasies as a substitute for actually having sex? Bet you a dollar I know who's gonna die a virgin......

This is total juvenile shit, get a thesaurus or a dictionary ('since', not 'sense' etc.) and learn how to spell, and for your information, the space between the pussy and the asshole is called the perineum, there, at last you actually know something connected with sex, use it from now on..

I enjoyed your story. Don't listen to these lame ass people. in most cases, bad reviews are written by people who can't do shit themselves, so they tear other aspiring authors down to make themselves feel better. Keep writing :)

Because I liked it and thought it was a good story. Let me remind all these critics that this is a porn site, the stories are a product of the author's imagination, usually if they are true he will mention that fact, THEN you can criticize on nonfactual happenings; imaginations of the author on a porn site stand on their own, you can like it or not but you can't critique the author's ideas (although I have been guilty of doing it myself once in a while). I usually just say "not my favorite", I don't try to make the author look like an idiot. Thank you, LAW, for entertaining us. You haters go you-know-where.

Stupid....how can it happen so fast

Great story it is saucy and delicious and just so much nasty it is steple

If you have any more stores like that email me at ozzysmith1971@gmail.com . I love to hear it

I read this Story and loved every word. I left my comment to the Author of it and said how much it was enjoyed. The comments from some just show that they have no idea of life in the fast lane. To the Author, Please right more and you can always count on this reader by sending him any and all the things you write, at rbill66@yahoo.com

Thanks Again.

My Anonymous has it's reasons.

Bill

Very exciting story! I do believe that they are together since six years and they have o other sex relations with third parties.I once said when you and your sister, love each other,fuck,and care for each other, There is no need to seek for extra relation. It is maybe the most powerful of love! !The only problem is that because of parents, close colleagues or friends, we have to keep such love secret.I know it by experience.

Mine giving us the story of making your sister your wife. Also some the your bad comments are weird everyone knows the English language is bullshit

bullshit

fkn hot sexy romp. Love to read more

Even tho this was a medium size story I think it could have been 2 or 3 pages more to give it a better buildup.But overall the characters and plot were almost lifelike,and I really got into the whole thing like I was actually there.Great Work and keep it up.

Wow, that was a very by story.

I started fucking my sister when I was 16 , she was 18 and we still fuck today in our 50s - we are both married , but find time to indulge

"...Since that summer..."

Not sense.