Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 52

Very Good, but too short

You are a good writer. My only criticism is your stories are too short.

I would not mind you taking some time (i.e. a few days) between the release of chapters, so they are longer and move the story further along.

Unlike anonymous below

I really like the fact that your posts are so frequent, even if they are pretty short.

pornstars? that was the big lame secret? so not worth it.

second opinion

yes the stories are short
but for some of us with short attention spans
this is the best way to tell an adventure
keeps me coming back to see what happening
with the "family" and other friends

good job