by Eleanora Day
didn't get an E is beyond me.
One of the most sensual romantic sexy things I've read in a long time.
Perfect
Right words, right phrasing, right tempo
It's like a slow samba playing at dusk
beautiful
Thank you
what a fine example. It has all the right elements said in a complimentary voice.
...beautiful piece of erotic writing, Eleanora. Thank you for this.
you captured the essence of erotica here.
beautiful, fully enjoyable! ty!
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