Down on the Farm Ch. 02

I really like this story; I think any sane man would love the thought of this woman who loves sex just landing in his bed. But.........the almost instant closeness and familiarity, as if they had been married or known each other for years would be unsettling and she seems oblivious to it. Is she this way with all of her former loser boyfriends? Is she going to take over his life and run it to the point of being oppressive and domineering? Somehow I can picture this woman in my mind, images pop up of similar personalities I have known, women I would not want to be married to.

Great and hot chapter

A really hot chapter.
I think Gina is a woman without complexes, who knows her body and her needs, so she feels that her relationship with Richard is totally natural to be both together as if they were a couple for a long time, not just a few days. Perhaps there may be some abuse of trust on Gina's part, but for Richard it's fine, as he has already expressed.
The only thing I could comment on as a small criticism (and not too critical, after all, this is LIT), is that it seems that the relationship is too sex based, but that is my personal opinion, since I like the Romance slow, work for seduction in the medium or long term, but I can not and should not influence the opinion of the author, I am a simple reader who enjoys their stories (also with "My number").
So I give you 5 * for a good job.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

It was different on purpose

The Old Romantic would have preferred the sex slower, but I have taken the sex slower in some of my other series, and I made this one different deliberately. I'm a mostly romance writer, but I don't want to get stuck in a rut.

Also, on reading this once posted, I see that I've made some horrible editing errors; I cannot edit once published, and I am considering, once I get the third (and last) chapter written, publishing the whole story as one chapter, to get the mistakes corrected.

She knew what she wanted --

and took it!
Really a great story - it can stand alone but I (for one) would LOVE to see some more of this pair!

A bit different from your usual

I like this one a lot, not only because it's so much different from your other stories, but mostly for the carefree approach to everything in life that would otherwise be too much stress. Also the slightly older characters give the story a certain flair that comes with age, and the sex being on a rougher side is also fun as I imagine sweet lovin' comes later when they dive into their relationship and emotions with time.

5* for now.

P.S. Do try to continue "Under the tuscan sun" soon please!

Where - oh - where ??????

First, I really like this story. Its so believable and down to earth that it may not be fiction at all. Gina sounds like someone I have been looking for and never found. The farm sounds like it is Shangri-La. Needs work and yearns to be comfortable. I waited several days for chapter 2 and I am already waiting for Chapter 3. I rated this a 5 star and looking for much more. Thank you for a most enjoyable read. Have you started Chapter 4 outline yet? Gina sounds too good to be true. Is her mother going to be a fox also? Please keep up the good work.

Chapter 3 has been submitted

I was planning to conclude with Chapter 3, but got on a roll; it's not the conclusion.

Sawdusty1 wrote:

"Its so believable and down to earth that it may not be fiction at all."

That's just it: it isn't all fiction!

The story is fiction, but the places are not. I use details to place my stories in locations and in time, and these aren't made up; they are places, and times, where I have been in my life. The farm described? I know exactly where it is, and just what it looks like. Gina's mom's house? Slightly more generic, but descriptive of thousands of homes in Appalachia. Route 52? A real road.

ReedRichards said the intent was for this to be different

Mission Accomplished. Different is an understatement. And different is good. And fun. And amusing.

But, there seems to be a disconnect in the storyline. After going to her mother's home for a change of clothes they made a stop at the market " I might as well grab some food for breakfast for tomorrow," I added, " they stowed her personal items and the groceries before heading for the bedroom.
And yet, when they awoke the next morning,
" she asked, "Have we got anything for breakfast here?" I noticed: she said 'we,' not 'you.'
"Not much. The range isn't connected, and cooking means using the charcoal grill. I have a toaster and a microwave in the garage, and a small pantry in there. Occasionally I'll grill up something, but I've mostly been eating sandwiches and stuff."
" There wasn't much for us, really just some toast and butter, but it was enough."
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