Falling

The best story I've read on the site

The story was long but well written. I related to the characters and want more. Hope you post more soon.

Thanks

Five Stars!

This, is definitely one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. It's easily on par with the superlative works of other great writers here, such as Burntredstone. I do hope you're planning a continuation, because it really needs it.....Thanks!

For those who read to the end!

First I want to thank everyone for reading! I am looking to improve my writing and connect with my readers, so please, rate and comment on the story and feel free to leave comments and/or feedback! I try to respond to things and people that ask questions and will be checking in regularly!

I am at this point about half way through the second part of this story, so favorite me so that you can get information about me and when I publish new stuff!

Great reading

Please don't let this story die here, you have a great start to a awesome series. Please continue

Well, I don't want to be a wet blanket, you spent a lot of time on the story, but I was just completely turned off by your protagonist. He was such an ass to Karly early on and so touchy about everything, I developed an instant dislike for him. I skipped to the end to make a comment and don't mean to come across as completely negative, but it was just not my kind of story.

I really can't thank everyone enough for the support this story has received!

Without it, I most likely wouldn't have gotten out of my headspace of telling myself that I sucked enough to keep on pushing on with it! I love all of you for the support, and really appreciate both the votes and the comments (I love comments as it lets me see what my readers are really enjoying and what they aren't!).

Even the one negative comment I received was insightful as it gave me a chance to think back to my character development and decide if I was happy with it!

Again, I can't thank my readers enough! I love you all and appreciate your support!

Awesome read!

A Winner!