Loved your story. I had a similar experience with my wife only I was
watching her get fucked from the closet. It was so hot and we fucked
like rabbits after her event with her Italian lover. Keep up the good work.
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Anonymous02/09/17
Chuck shit
And there married. Who wants a whore for a wife. So sick, those who love it ,have a warped view of life.
Not a whole lot of scan-through-it-quickly plot development and background description that many writers of stroke stories erroneously seem to think is necessary. The loving wife is scalding hot, knows what turns on her man, and the loving husband is totally appreciative. Well written, in my opinion and the opinion of my throbbing dick.
RyeandGingerAyle
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Anonymous02/09/17
re: one of the best in this genre?
Really? From the looks of the comments, that's a matter of opinion. Actually a story like this, doesn't do a damn thing for my libido, actually the opposite. Hot cheating wives and their willing cuckolds are about as erotic as watching paint dry.
I do like the practice run, Holly is one smart girl. So a couple thoughts I had while reading, when Mark introduces Holly to her husband a good place for him to steal her away. What if Holly invited her lover to the hotel, 'Mark' now she can legally hook-up with him for a couple weeks. Lastly take hubby home and show him just what she did for Mark upstairs with his bigger cock. Nice job of rubbing it in to. Invite Tim.
Good job on a storyline that works because men are just men, and hasn't it always been ladies choice.
by
Anonymous02/09/17
"Wife flirts while hubby watches, goes further than expected."
Really? Given the rote nature of the story it went where I would imagine most people expected it to go. Now, if they had set up some definitive barriers, such as flirting was okay but actually fucking was not, then it would have gone further than expected -- at least by them.
by
Anonymous02/09/17
Sad
Typical repressed homosexual fantasy. Cardboard characters. Trite plot. Not erotic.
I give it 5 poops. 💩💩💩💩💩
by
Anonymous02/09/17
Fag
You wimpy cucky get to EAT MY USED CONDOMS YAG CUCKY FAG
by
Anonymous02/10/17
The Usual Stupids
It amazes me that the usual stupids are bitching about a story that they predictably found offensive. Surely they are dumb enough to be Trump lovers. Be honest with yourself that you like cuckold stories, or be smart enough to avoid them if you don't, you stupid losers.
by
Anonymous02/10/17
re The Usual Stupids....
Are you talking about yourself nimrod? You say nothing about the story only comment on other peoples comments. And they are stupid? I think not Einstein.As for this story? Non erotic,non original cliche drivel.Nothing new Nothing erotic Just another in a litany of willing cuckold slop
by
Anonymous02/10/17
Title makes no sense.
But I understand, author probably didn't even read his own post
by
Anonymous02/10/17
Can I fuck your wife too? Then you can Blow me and get it from the source faggot
by
Anonymous02/10/17
the usual stupids
that quite a statement and i think sums up the person that came up with it an idiot as is the person who wrote this piece of crap.
by
Anonymous02/10/17
Terrible
The quality of stories lately just so poor that I will just have to go to the archives to read stories from real writers who have long since left.... I am sure some like cuck shit, but it ruins the site for me.... Jay80
I quite enjoy a cuckold story but didn't take to this one mainly because there was no context. I can't visualise the woman because the writer doesn't tell me how old she is, what she looks like, is she skinny is she curvaceous? Why are they having sex issues at home? The author could have told me these things and I would have enjoyed the piece more.
I have to say it was written quite well and flowed very easily. One last point. She has just had, was is implied as the best sex she has ever had with this stranger she has just met - but from setting off to his hotel room, having multiple orgasmic sex and being penetrated on several ocassions - it was all over in forty minutes! I have had fumbles behind the bike sheds that have lasted longer than that. I hope my comments are accepted as constructive.
The writer treated this matter the same way as he would write about two friends agreeing to go out and play Bowling or have a drink while watching a game on TV. And that destroyed all the credibility of the story! They never discussed it seriously, trying to look to the pros and cons, what could happen after the lust cooled down, how all that could interfere with their loving marriage. For instance: how she feel and react if her husband thinks that now he is entitled to fuck some other woman too? Half the story was about him getting a room in a hotel away from home, and then suddenly she wasn't worried any more if she was seen with another man in their home town! Then also suddenly her husband became a creampie cleaner...That I can understand: she lost all the respect she had for her husband: A man that let his wife fuck strangers, bareback...And with no respect, love will go away soon too...Following that the marriage! 1*
It reminds me of the first time I was with another guy. Some here I saw don't think you said enough about this or that but I think most of us can easily fill those parts in. If you ever come to the chat room here in literotica, look me up. I think it would be fun to chat with you since our experiences were a lot alike. 5 stars
by
Anonymous02/10/17
Definitely this should be in Gay Male, with some honesty added.
This was totally a fantasy about sucking up the cum from a big cock. Why use a woman as the vehicle when you really want to go right to the source? You are disrespecting women, whom you probably have very little experience with, and you are trying to humiliate husbands, who you probably have a very disturbed experience with in the form of your father. I'm sure its a tragic story.
But whatever, there is no shame in wanting to eat another man's cum, if that's your fetish. But you should be more considerate of where you publish this sort of queer fantasy. I'm sure there are a lot of fellow cock suckers who would totally eat this story up, and you, if they knew where to find it. Put this story where it belongs.
thank god u didn't front load this with context
.."we first met at...." arghh that would have been terrible
scant description of wife allows reader to fill in gaps as they fantasize...even their own wife!
would love to read more!
even add in some husband denial / chastity for spice?
and the hottest sauce there is....emotional cucking! ?
The usual idiots who don't like cuckold stories have to put in there $0.02 for some reason as if they are trying to save humanity. if you don't like this type of story...don't read it! It's amazing how something so simple evades these people.
I am divorced, but if I had her as my wife, I would agree to the same deal.The lover shooting his cum in her really does it for me. Pregnancy from that would be a nice result! Pregnancy is my best fetish!!!
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Anonymous02/11/17
LOL
I have to chuckle at the cuckold lovers who get their panties in a twist bitching about other readers who just don't see this as erotic. The little cunts like it when their wives fuck others and they get to clean them out with their tongue. Sick bastards, if you ask me. Yeah, yeah, I can hear them already. You don't know what your missing. Try it you'll like it. Heard it all on this site. Next thing we'll hear is her claiming that she wants her "married pussy" fucked by a big dick. Well why not. Whores will do anything for their willing cuckies, even bring home some creampies for them. Isn't that swell. Lunch is served!
by
Anonymous02/11/17
@babock
Had your creampie meal today yet? You should, I just send your wife home to you filled up to the curly hairs. Enjoy. No need to thank me, my pleasure to help you out, cuckold.
by
Anonymous02/11/17
re: the usual stupids
You got that right bud, the usual stupids are always here. You are including yourself, aren't you, after all anybody that praises crap like this is really "stupid".
By the way, drop off your wife at my place tonight, I'll be glad to fill her up for you for a late night snack. Sounds yummy, doesn't it. lol
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Anonymous02/12/17
re:charliebill
I can see why your divorced. Your motor stopped running a long time ago and wife got tired of jump starting it, or maybe you wanted her to do things she didn't like. Since this story seems to crank your muscle, I can just imagine what you wanted her to do. Good for her, to dump your sorry ass.
What the fuck,he's one dumb cuck!
Don't think the love will last in this marriage,as the twat figures it's ok now to cheat,even when her dip-shit cuck isn't around.
She'll quickly become a size queen,from the look of things,and will fuck any big swinging dick she can find.
We can only hope that contracts several STDs,gives them to cucky before she dumps him,gets knocked up and gives birth a year before she dies of Aids.
by
Anonymous02/12/17
A story written by a pervert idiot for pervert idiots!!! MINUS 5*!!!
Only real insane people can approve with that cuck shit!!!
Out of the blue, he tells her he wants her to sleep with another man, and she says okay like it's nothing? Do you actually know any women? Any happily married women? Ridiculous.
by
Anonymous02/12/17
I Wish
I wish my wife would try it. We talked but she won't do it.
by
Anonymous02/12/17
My wife
Awesome story, thanks! My wife and I recently entered the hotwife lifestyle. Im eagerly awaiting when we're to the point where we're meeting strange men. Then soon after he's fucking my wife in a hotel room!!
by
Anonymous02/13/17
Oh, no.
This ass wipe found his way back to further pollute this category. Don't we have enough of you swine spreading your manure around. It's getting to deep already.
by
Anonymous02/13/17
@anonymous-I wish
Don't wish to hard, you may wake up one morning without a wife. Find yourself a whore if that's what you want for a wife. Sounds like the wife has the brains in your household.
by
Anonymous02/13/17
Correct me if I'm wrong, but
it seems like the stories in LW are getting dumber by the day. Stupid, ignorant characters seem to be the norm anymore. Are all these newer authors cut from the same mold? This week has been something, the likes of BrainGym, more like brain dead and then MindBlown75 another trash writer. Every day the same crappy shit.
by
Anonymous02/13/17
Idiots
It amazes me how these stories are always followed by numerous comments from people who "hate these stupid stories where the wife cheats", yet, they keep reading them. How stupid are these morons, anyway? I think it's a great start for a potentially really good series. Ignore the idiots.
by
Anonymous02/14/17
ANONY; CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG...
No correction needed. This cuckold shit is getting might thin. Real men don't appreciate some else's dick in what belongs to them. And just when are the cuckolds in these stories just going to ask the wife to bring the swinging dick home so they the cuckold can just suck him off without having to touch that nasty pussy. Drinking straight from the tap.
by
Anonymous02/14/17
5 *'s
Simply to piss off that one faggot who posts negative comments in this story section.
by
Anonymous02/14/17
Where did all the haters come from?
It was a fun story. Kind of predictable, but well written and just enough to get me where I wanted to go. I have done the same and more. We are too old now, but I wish we weren't. Life is short, f'ing relax and have fun. I guess folks think marriage is a sentence of being bored to death. As long as you both agree and can be open, have fun! I feel sorry for all the haters and especially your wives. You must be horribly unimaginative and uptight in bed. Your loss, the orgasms from crazy sex like that are off the charts! So haters, go back to your Amish camps and whip yourselves for being sinners and let the rest of us enjoy ourselves, lol.
by
Anonymous02/14/17
where did all the haters come from?
Why that's easy to answer. Look in the mirror. Oh, there you are. Are you done whining yet? Well, collect all the rest of the whiners here and all of you jump in a deep lake. Thank you. What a bunch of idiots, crying on a porn site defending the sewer rats.
P.S. anon-5* that includes you too Bonny. Wash the cum off your legs first.
by
Anonymous02/14/17
3.79
How did a shit story like this get a score like that. Why that's an insult to the real erotic writers who post here. Must be a lot of perverts passing through to score this so high. Didn't realize there were so many sickos on this site. 1*
English
Hot story
Loved your story. I had a similar experience with my wife only I was
watching her get fucked from the closet. It was so hot and we fucked
like rabbits after her event with her Italian lover. Keep up the good work.
Chuck shit
And there married. Who wants a whore for a wife. So sick, those who love it ,have a warped view of life.
Pathetic
Why be married?
One of the best of this genre!
Not a whole lot of scan-through-it-quickly plot development and background description that many writers of stroke stories erroneously seem to think is necessary. The loving wife is scalding hot, knows what turns on her man, and the loving husband is totally appreciative. Well written, in my opinion and the opinion of my throbbing dick.
RyeandGingerAyle
re: one of the best in this genre?
Really? From the looks of the comments, that's a matter of opinion. Actually a story like this, doesn't do a damn thing for my libido, actually the opposite. Hot cheating wives and their willing cuckolds are about as erotic as watching paint dry.
Valet parking.
I do like the practice run, Holly is one smart girl. So a couple thoughts I had while reading, when Mark introduces Holly to her husband a good place for him to steal her away. What if Holly invited her lover to the hotel, 'Mark' now she can legally hook-up with him for a couple weeks. Lastly take hubby home and show him just what she did for Mark upstairs with his bigger cock. Nice job of rubbing it in to. Invite Tim.
Good job on a storyline that works because men are just men, and hasn't it always been ladies choice.
"Wife flirts while hubby watches, goes further than expected."
Really? Given the rote nature of the story it went where I would imagine most people expected it to go. Now, if they had set up some definitive barriers, such as flirting was okay but actually fucking was not, then it would have gone further than expected -- at least by them.
Sad
Typical repressed homosexual fantasy. Cardboard characters. Trite plot. Not erotic.
I give it 5 poops. 💩💩💩💩💩
Fag
You wimpy cucky get to EAT MY USED CONDOMS YAG CUCKY FAG
The Usual Stupids
It amazes me that the usual stupids are bitching about a story that they predictably found offensive. Surely they are dumb enough to be Trump lovers. Be honest with yourself that you like cuckold stories, or be smart enough to avoid them if you don't, you stupid losers.
re The Usual Stupids....
Are you talking about yourself nimrod? You say nothing about the story only comment on other peoples comments. And they are stupid? I think not Einstein.As for this story? Non erotic,non original cliche drivel.Nothing new Nothing erotic Just another in a litany of willing cuckold slop
Title makes no sense.
But I understand, author probably didn't even read his own post
Can I fuck your wife too? Then you can Blow me and get it from the source faggot
the usual stupids
that quite a statement and i think sums up the person that came up with it an idiot as is the person who wrote this piece of crap.
Terrible
The quality of stories lately just so poor that I will just have to go to the archives to read stories from real writers who have long since left.... I am sure some like cuck shit, but it ruins the site for me.... Jay80
not enough context
I quite enjoy a cuckold story but didn't take to this one mainly because there was no context. I can't visualise the woman because the writer doesn't tell me how old she is, what she looks like, is she skinny is she curvaceous? Why are they having sex issues at home? The author could have told me these things and I would have enjoyed the piece more.
I have to say it was written quite well and flowed very easily. One last point. She has just had, was is implied as the best sex she has ever had with this stranger she has just met - but from setting off to his hotel room, having multiple orgasmic sex and being penetrated on several ocassions - it was all over in forty minutes! I have had fumbles behind the bike sheds that have lasted longer than that. I hope my comments are accepted as constructive.
1*
fag cuck shit.
The writer treated this matter the same way...
The writer treated this matter the same way as he would write about two friends agreeing to go out and play Bowling or have a drink while watching a game on TV. And that destroyed all the credibility of the story! They never discussed it seriously, trying to look to the pros and cons, what could happen after the lust cooled down, how all that could interfere with their loving marriage. For instance: how she feel and react if her husband thinks that now he is entitled to fuck some other woman too? Half the story was about him getting a room in a hotel away from home, and then suddenly she wasn't worried any more if she was seen with another man in their home town! Then also suddenly her husband became a creampie cleaner...That I can understand: she lost all the respect she had for her husband: A man that let his wife fuck strangers, bareback...And with no respect, love will go away soon too...Following that the marriage! 1*
Great sotry
It reminds me of the first time I was with another guy. Some here I saw don't think you said enough about this or that but I think most of us can easily fill those parts in. If you ever come to the chat room here in literotica, look me up. I think it would be fun to chat with you since our experiences were a lot alike. 5 stars
Definitely this should be in Gay Male, with some honesty added.
This was totally a fantasy about sucking up the cum from a big cock. Why use a woman as the vehicle when you really want to go right to the source? You are disrespecting women, whom you probably have very little experience with, and you are trying to humiliate husbands, who you probably have a very disturbed experience with in the form of your father. I'm sure its a tragic story.
But whatever, there is no shame in wanting to eat another man's cum, if that's your fetish. But you should be more considerate of where you publish this sort of queer fantasy. I'm sure there are a lot of fellow cock suckers who would totally eat this story up, and you, if they knew where to find it. Put this story where it belongs.
top 1% of the genre
thank god u didn't front load this with context
.."we first met at...." arghh that would have been terrible
scant description of wife allows reader to fill in gaps as they fantasize...even their own wife!
would love to read more!
even add in some husband denial / chastity for spice?
and the hottest sauce there is....emotional cucking! ?
1*
fag cuck shit.
Good story
Good story , looking forward to seeing how this develops . Maybe Marks friend will have a play . Well done
Hot Story
Got my panties wet. Lets hear more about the wife and that big dick.
Awesome
The usual idiots who don't like cuckold stories have to put in there $0.02 for some reason as if they are trying to save humanity. if you don't like this type of story...don't read it! It's amazing how something so simple evades these people.
ok but..
Wish there was more details re the sex
This hot story started my motor!!
I am divorced, but if I had her as my wife, I would agree to the same deal.The lover shooting his cum in her really does it for me. Pregnancy from that would be a nice result! Pregnancy is my best fetish!!!
LOL
I have to chuckle at the cuckold lovers who get their panties in a twist bitching about other readers who just don't see this as erotic. The little cunts like it when their wives fuck others and they get to clean them out with their tongue. Sick bastards, if you ask me. Yeah, yeah, I can hear them already. You don't know what your missing. Try it you'll like it. Heard it all on this site. Next thing we'll hear is her claiming that she wants her "married pussy" fucked by a big dick. Well why not. Whores will do anything for their willing cuckies, even bring home some creampies for them. Isn't that swell. Lunch is served!
@babock
Had your creampie meal today yet? You should, I just send your wife home to you filled up to the curly hairs. Enjoy. No need to thank me, my pleasure to help you out, cuckold.
re: the usual stupids
You got that right bud, the usual stupids are always here. You are including yourself, aren't you, after all anybody that praises crap like this is really "stupid".
By the way, drop off your wife at my place tonight, I'll be glad to fill her up for you for a late night snack. Sounds yummy, doesn't it. lol
re:charliebill
I can see why your divorced. Your motor stopped running a long time ago and wife got tired of jump starting it, or maybe you wanted her to do things she didn't like. Since this story seems to crank your muscle, I can just imagine what you wanted her to do. Good for her, to dump your sorry ass.
i like it
good story more please
Very Hot, But...
What the fuck,he's one dumb cuck!
Don't think the love will last in this marriage,as the twat figures it's ok now to cheat,even when her dip-shit cuck isn't around.
She'll quickly become a size queen,from the look of things,and will fuck any big swinging dick she can find.
We can only hope that contracts several STDs,gives them to cucky before she dumps him,gets knocked up and gives birth a year before she dies of Aids.
A story written by a pervert idiot for pervert idiots!!! MINUS 5*!!!
Only real insane people can approve with that cuck shit!!!
Unreal
Out of the blue, he tells her he wants her to sleep with another man, and she says okay like it's nothing? Do you actually know any women? Any happily married women? Ridiculous.
I Wish
I wish my wife would try it. We talked but she won't do it.
My wife
Awesome story, thanks! My wife and I recently entered the hotwife lifestyle. Im eagerly awaiting when we're to the point where we're meeting strange men. Then soon after he's fucking my wife in a hotel room!!
Oh, no.
This ass wipe found his way back to further pollute this category. Don't we have enough of you swine spreading your manure around. It's getting to deep already.
@anonymous-I wish
Don't wish to hard, you may wake up one morning without a wife. Find yourself a whore if that's what you want for a wife. Sounds like the wife has the brains in your household.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but
it seems like the stories in LW are getting dumber by the day. Stupid, ignorant characters seem to be the norm anymore. Are all these newer authors cut from the same mold? This week has been something, the likes of BrainGym, more like brain dead and then MindBlown75 another trash writer. Every day the same crappy shit.
Idiots
It amazes me how these stories are always followed by numerous comments from people who "hate these stupid stories where the wife cheats", yet, they keep reading them. How stupid are these morons, anyway? I think it's a great start for a potentially really good series. Ignore the idiots.
ANONY; CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG...
No correction needed. This cuckold shit is getting might thin. Real men don't appreciate some else's dick in what belongs to them. And just when are the cuckolds in these stories just going to ask the wife to bring the swinging dick home so they the cuckold can just suck him off without having to touch that nasty pussy. Drinking straight from the tap.
5 *'s
Simply to piss off that one faggot who posts negative comments in this story section.
Where did all the haters come from?
It was a fun story. Kind of predictable, but well written and just enough to get me where I wanted to go. I have done the same and more. We are too old now, but I wish we weren't. Life is short, f'ing relax and have fun. I guess folks think marriage is a sentence of being bored to death. As long as you both agree and can be open, have fun! I feel sorry for all the haters and especially your wives. You must be horribly unimaginative and uptight in bed. Your loss, the orgasms from crazy sex like that are off the charts! So haters, go back to your Amish camps and whip yourselves for being sinners and let the rest of us enjoy ourselves, lol.
where did all the haters come from?
Why that's easy to answer. Look in the mirror. Oh, there you are. Are you done whining yet? Well, collect all the rest of the whiners here and all of you jump in a deep lake. Thank you. What a bunch of idiots, crying on a porn site defending the sewer rats.
P.S. anon-5* that includes you too Bonny. Wash the cum off your legs first.
3.79
How did a shit story like this get a score like that. Why that's an insult to the real erotic writers who post here. Must be a lot of perverts passing through to score this so high. Didn't realize there were so many sickos on this site. 1*
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