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by tjb50cal02/10/17

interesting but confuseing

useing the name Michelle i hope is female?, not male, it seems if your writing from a third person point of view ? 2 males and 1 female or 2 female and one male?
write longer stories please, more details needed.....

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by Anonymous02/10/17

A good begining

I hope you develop this story

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by Anonymous02/11/17

SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIA N:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:


Too lazy to do a he said, she said?

Nobody writes like that.

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by Anonymous02/14/17

Strange

Interesting way to write a third party story about incest

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