useing the name Michelle i hope is female?, not male, it seems if your writing from a third person point of view ? 2 males and 1 female or 2 female and one male? write longer stories please, more details needed.....
I hope you develop this story
SEBASTIAN: MICHELLE: SEBASTIAN: MICHELLE: SEBASTIA N: MICHELLE: SEBASTIAN: MICHELLE: Too lazy to do a he said, she said? Nobody writes like that.
Interesting way to write a third party story about incest
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interesting but confuseing
useing the name Michelle i hope is female?, not male, it seems if your writing from a third person point of view ? 2 males and 1 female or 2 female and one male?
write longer stories please, more details needed.....
A good begining
I hope you develop this story
SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIA N:
MICHELLE:
SEBASTIAN:
MICHELLE:
Too lazy to do a he said, she said?
Nobody writes like that.
Strange
Interesting way to write a third party story about incest
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