Secretary to Slut - Susan's Journey

Thanks for taking the time to read. This is my first ever story so I don't know if it makes the mark or not. Do leave me some feedback if you think I should continue and also if you have ideas on how the storyline could evolve or improve.

Nice story

Nice! Good slow build up. The great thing about women in the pleasure industry is that they don't obey the "normal" conventions. See my "Business Model" and "We strip just for you" pleasure industry stories. In a story, remember character viewpoint, the reader can only be in one person's mind. I think the two most important elements in an erotic story are plausibility and real characters and you seem to have hit that. Keep writing!