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HOT STORY
This should bring out all the hate filled comments one can imagin.
Good story tho.
Naughty story with a twist
Good story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Especially the part about the guy sucking the other guys cock And the naughty wife encouraging It all.
This threesome 2 guys and a girl is just all some naughty fun.
I've been there with my wife and my friend Steve.
Keep writing we enjoyed your story
And NO my friend Steve and I are not gay We just both enjoy pleasing my wife Debbie. After 27 years of marriage the fire is still there It's just SEX:)
NOT BAD!
This is fairly well written--only spotted a few typos and they were not enough to jar me out of the story. I'm surprised you don't have a lot of comments complaining about the story line itself and telling you it's in the wrong category, which it is.
While I don't care for the story line, I gave you a 4 since your writing craft is good and you told the story you chose very well.
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