All Comments on 'Havenhurst Academy Ch. 02'

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Dnrlovers2722Dnrlovers2722about 7 years ago
Damn

Freaky and sexy. I'm shaking and quivering at the same time.

Moon_KnightMoon_Knightabout 7 years ago
Part I much better than Part II.

Hopeful the next part recaptures the magic of the first part. This one seemed a bit rushed to get it out and more time would have been good for a good edit and check of the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Simply wonderful

Amazing story, from a very talented author. Intriguing characters mixed with the perfect amount of action and plot development is a recipe for a wonderful story. You have a gift for writing, and I would love for you to continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
This is just amazing

I wish for you to continue honestly this is going places if you do

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More chapters please

Please write one chapters it's a great story. I'd love to hear more of it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Need the next chapter

This is good , but don't leave us hanging too long !! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Monsters

I'm going to take a wild guess that Chloe is some type of Goetic/Eldritch abomination, Shoko is an Eastern Demon/Oni, Penny is a ghoul/zombie, Mary Jane is a Ghost, Champa is a naga/marilith/lamia/middle eastern beast, and the goth lolita is a banshee/daugter of the devil. I have no idea what the headmistress could be.

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