by mondotoken
Hopeful the next part recaptures the magic of the first part. This one seemed a bit rushed to get it out and more time would have been good for a good edit and check of the flow.
Amazing story, from a very talented author. Intriguing characters mixed with the perfect amount of action and plot development is a recipe for a wonderful story. You have a gift for writing, and I would love for you to continue this story.
I wish for you to continue honestly this is going places if you do
Please write one chapters it's a great story. I'd love to hear more of it
This is good , but don't leave us hanging too long !! :)
I'm going to take a wild guess that Chloe is some type of Goetic/Eldritch abomination, Shoko is an Eastern Demon/Oni, Penny is a ghoul/zombie, Mary Jane is a Ghost, Champa is a naga/marilith/lamia/middle eastern beast, and the goth lolita is a banshee/daugter of the devil. I have no idea what the headmistress could be.