All Comments on 'The Master Piece Ch. 03'

by SpoiledRedhead

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
More??

Ok it's been 4 months since they picked out the sectional. When will we finishing decorating the house and trying out each room in the new house???

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneover 6 years ago
The Best Scene so far in this Sexy Serial

I enjoyed the bonus of public humiliation and sex in the episode. I was hoping you would bring it full circle at the end, and have either the salesman return, or the shopping customers catch our heroine cumming all over James' tongue and beard. She would be mortified and so turned on at the same time.

These episodes are so short, personal and intense; I think they would work well in the Present Tense. Like:

"God James," I whimper as I try to close my thighs, not sure if I am trying to trap your face there or keep us from getting caught.

The Present Tense gets awkward over a longer narrative. But these are so short and hot, I think it might work. Just a thought.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous