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You ought to be put up....
...for any & all awards that Literotica bestows. Hell, you might even try to sell it to 1 of those detective mags as a short story. In my opinion, it's that good (after you piece both parts together). It just goes to prove what I've always said, "You live by a kink, you die by a kinky woman that's found you all tied up with no place to go...except, maybe, Hell." GOOD JOB! Bravo, Huzzah & all that shit!
Excellent and very real to life Story
While it's not the sexiest story here, it's a pretty good mystery story that has the potential to do well with a detective or mystery magazine.
Nicely done!
Great job Oggy
Best of luck with the comp ;-)
Excellent ending!
You had me guessing all the way through. Bravo!!!
Compelling Read
Well done Ogg. Nicely spun tale, held me till the very end.
Wow
This story reds like the abstract of a damned good book and I urge you to consider either putting it in an anthology or using it as the core of a novel.
It really is that good !
I had read this before...
...and I enjoyed reading it again. Thank you for writing.
Brilliant
What an absolutely fabulous story. Well Done.
thank you
I love it when women see women! How many such cases have ended up with other females dead or disfigured because going to the police usually only brings disaster and shame upon oneself? While the criminal walks free? It is a pity, but because of the shame-system that was used to chastise woman even further into obscurity starting a few thousand years ago, we are still seen as responsible for any act of sex, consensual or not, we are involved in. If you have been drinking, you are sure to be the solicitor in a case of assault with intent to do grievous bodily harm perpetrated against you. If you were drunk and naked, well, that was just asking for it, wasn't it? So many crimes go unrecorded because of the fear that they'll only be recorded and left at that. So many criminals have been able to count on that and have perpetuated with violence against both sexes when they should have been dealt with after their first venture. The women in this story were even too ashamed to tell a perfectly understanding male about what have been done to them. I love stories like this. I wish there were more and that they could get even more exposure. But unfortunately only the very brave can write about how the fabric of life works and not everybody who reads want to know how the great clock ticks. The way television dish these crimes up, doesn't help us either. Thanks Oggbashan.
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